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Sexy Space Babes: Chapter Sixty Eight

🕑 Added 2021-10-02 10:11:59 +0000 UTC

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Blue Fishcake

Thanks, I try :D

Julien Barrette

“I’m sorry we stole your stuff. Can we be vassalized now?”

Joshua Whitmore

I really enjoy the craft you have put into this story. Thank you for flushed characters and motives, with a plot that has depth.

Justin Eames

Every comment for the next chapter needs to start with "nice."

Blue Fishcake

Lips, and fixed thanks :D

Konrahd_Verdammt

Maykil’s twitched slightly upwards at his frustration...what twitched upward?

Avery

If chapter 69 isn't full of pancakes, I'll be both thoroughly disappointed and thoroughly happy.

Sheeprat

Young jason just negotiated a species joining the empire that could be seen as a very large accomplishment and may rise his star more then he could know

Orion Dye

I’d argue it’s less pragmatism and more fatalism. Seeing and bowing to the inevitable and trying your best to make the most of it.

Ripley Riley

A lot of pragmatism from the chieftess. Admirable.

Curly

Quotation marks should be either single or double at all times. The only exception is quotations within quotations. "Well, it is a 'blah' thing," she said. (Or swapped for the UK or Australia) Your dialogue tags are also inconsistent with punctuation and capitalisation. I suggest reading this: https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/ Thanks for the chapter. Wonder if Jason will meet any of the roaches in person.

Amelgar

ah... did Jason just jinx it?

Tim Speller

"Can we have our stuff back?" "K" "Thx"


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