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Sexy Space Babes: Chapter Eighty Two - End of Book Three
🕑 Added 2022-01-18 16:26:32 +0000 UTC“You came.”
Yaro stood across from him in her dress uniform. While she’d not received an offer to join the Imperium’s officer core, she’d still been given an invitation to the event as one of the few members of the regiment who was still on-planet.
Though he doubted that would remain the case for long now that he’d effectively torpedoed the Imperium’s plans for him. No, with his resignation from the military, Jason had a feeling Yaro’s time as a bodyguard was at an end. She’d likely be returning to the same role she’d occupied before he’d come into her life. Though he had to wonder if that would mean a return to the dead-end posting that was Gurathu?
Not that the Rakiri’s future career trajectory was his current foremost concern.
“I did,” she allowed. “I even managed to slip out in the confusion you created with your little exit speech.”
Her tone was entirely flat, and he couldn’t help but feel some of his excitement wither at the reminder that he’d just essentially shat all over the Imperial military with his words. An Imperial military that Yaro very much believed in.
As evidenced by her actions the last time they’d met face to face. Given he’d spent the last two months alternately being metaphorically tied to the interrogation chair or attending meetings, he’d not exactly had the opportunity to chat with her.
Not that he hadn’t tried. He certainly had. Unfortunately for him, it seemed Yaro was trying just as hard to avoid him in those few moments he’d had available.
She’d certainly not come back to their shared apartment.
Raisha and Kernathu had told him not to worry. That she’d come around eventually. That she just needed some time alone. Jason… wasn’t so sure. Which was why he couldn’t help but feel, well, a number of conflicting feelings now that she was standing right in front of him.
“Ah,” he said awkwardly, for lack of anything else to say.
“It’s fine.” Yaro surprised him as she shook her head ruefully, ears flicking atop her head. “I knew what you were. Or I should have. I suppose part of me was deceiving myself whenever I thought you might be coming around. You certainly never made your feelings on the military unclear when we were in private.”
Jason nodded absently. He certainly hadn’t, which made things more than a little awkward on a few occasions, given that he lived in a household populated entirely by active service members.
Though not as awkward as it could have been. Raisha was enthused about the military, but that enthusiasm was more related to her position in it and what that position allowed her to do. Essentially, pilot exos and shoot bad guys. Deeper ruminations on who those bad guys were, and the wider ramifications of the Imperium, were not something she often pondered. Which he wouldn’t deny was one of the things he both loved about her and was frustrated by in equal measure.
For Kernathu, her job was exactly that, a job. Little more than a means to acquire a paycheck doing something she was good at – and perhaps cover for her own insecurities about what would have been considered ‘masculinity’ back on Earth.
For Tarcil, the military was an escape from the common expectations of a male around marriageable age. Beyond that, Jason had little idea about what his fellow male’s thoughts on the wider Imperium were. Like so many other things he thought about, the small Shil’vati could be deceptively tight lipped on the issue.
Yaro sighed. “I can’t deny though that some part of me hoped you were merely grousing, like you often do. After all, how could a man who was so critical of the Imperium stomach acting so positively when in public?”
Jason shrugged. He couldn’t exactly blame her for being confused by that. Few people could compartmentalise like he could. Push their real feelings down.
Although apparently even I have limits on that front, he thought, glancing back to the lecture hall. And perhaps I might have been served airing some of those grievances earlier, rather waiting for them to… explode.
Certainly, a few mutinous comments prior to this would have been rather satisfying. And likely a lot less hazardous to life and limb.
Yet he couldn’t quite bring himself to regret his most recent actions. After all, they had been rather satisfying.
Though I wonder if I’ll still be able to say that when the consequences of tonight finally come round to bite me in the ass, he thought, idly glancing in the direction of one of said consequences.
For his part, he’d already forgiven Yaro. Some part of him liked to think that was his more tolerant nature shining through, but a greater part of him had to concede that it was likely more down to him getting his way in that debate, while Yaro had been forced to take a impromptu nap.
“I never wanted to be a Marine.” He said finally. “I was conscripted. Forced to make a choice between military service and prison.”
To his surprise, Yaro wasn’t. “I know. I did a little research on you when we started getting… intimate.” Despite the situation, he couldn’t help but enjoy the way her tail flicked and her ears twitched at the words, an action only another Rakiri – or someone very familiar with one – would be able to interpret as the equivalent of an involuntary blush. “Your fight video is less popular in the wider data-net than it is on Earth, but it’s still not hard to find. And while the propaganda office did a decent job of spinning your motivations for picking that fight, for someone who knows you, well, it’s not hard to guess what series of events occurred.” She smiled at him. “It’s amusing to think that despite all the trouble it’s gotten you into, you still have trouble holding your drink.”
Jason smiled back ruefully. “I’d like to think I’ve gotten better at pacing myself.”
“You mean you’ve had less opportunity to get ‘wasted’?” The Rakiri shook her head with a scoff.
Jason smiled back at her, and just for a moment, he could fool himself into thinking that things were going to be ok.
Of course, it didn’t last. Because for all his other faults, he was a realist.
“I’m not a soldier,” he said finally.
“I know.” Yaro’s smile turned distinctly sad. “A soldier’s all I ever wanted to be. Ever since I knew what one was. A noble knight, journeying the stars as a defender of the peace and the defenceless.”
Jason shook his head, some small irritation flaring in his gut. “The Imperium hardly keeps the peace.”
Yaro cocked her head. “Don’t they? Where the Consortium seeks only profit and the Alliance care nothing for the worlds beyond their borders, the Imperium acts.”
“To expand those borders.”
“Perhaps,” she allowed. “But the end result is the same. I cannot claim the Imperium is perfect, but the average Imperial citizen lives a much better life than most. Call it vanity or pride, but the Imperium cares for the state of its people. None go without education, food, or homes. No threat to them is tolerated.”
“Except perhaps from those within their borders, provided they have the right blood.” He pointed out.
Yaro’s tail swished in a shrug. “As I said, the Imperium is not perfect. Yet that will change with time. With each passing decade, more and more power is allocated to the common woman. More and more of the nobility’s protections get repealed. Can you claim that a thousand years from now, the thousand petty kingdoms beyond the Imperium’s borders won’t still be squabbling over the same old divides? Race? Religion? Tribe?”
Jason couldn’t deny that. On either account. The Periphery was the kind of mess that made the Balkans look positively civilized. And the Imperium was advancing. Imitating the social advances of Humanity. But it was slow. So very slow. The Rakiri had been part of the Imperium for just over two hundred years, and yet were in dozens of ways still second-class citizens according to law.
How long would it take for the Imperium to do away with the ridiculous farce of superiority through blood entirely? Another thousand years? Ten? He couldn’t stomach a lifetime of that. Hell, he hadn’t been able to stomach two years.
So no, while he could understand Yaro’s point of view, he couldn’t bring himself to imitate it. Not least of all because he thought it horribly naïve. After all, who was to say the Imperium wouldn’t backtrack on those social advances? Or simply plateau one day?
He had a feeling she wasn’t here to argue with him about Imperial policy though. It was just the prelude to what they were both avoiding.
Unfortunately for both of them, he’d never been much good at putting things off.
“Are we?” he asked slowly.
Yaro smiled sadly.
“I think we should take a break.” She spoke resolutely, but not unkindly. “If for no other reason than that I think our lives are about to go in rapidly different directions.”
Jason’s heart fell, but he couldn’t find it in himself to argue. He’d long since forgiven Yaro for trying to stop him pulling off his insane plan. Just as it seemed Yaro had forgiven him. Still, there was no denying that a… rift had grown between them. Perhaps it was just the realization that they held radically different beliefs.
It wasn’t something he didn’t think they’d have been able to overcome – if it weren’t for the fact that they’d soon be separated by who knew how many lightyears. Distance was already enough of a strain on a relationship. For one that was already being strained, it might as well be a death knell.
Better to… break things off cleanly now, he thought.
Still, he felt like a coward and a traitor as he smiled sadly back at her. “If you think that’s best.”
It was a strange thing, to hope that he both did and didn’t see disappointment in her posture as she nodded quietly. “I do, I know it’s-”
Her words trailed off as her eyes alighted on something over his shoulder, her somewhat sad expression shifting into a scowl. He was about to turn to see what had distracted her when she continued. “Regardless of everything that’s happened, I hope you do well for yourself Jason. Wherever you end up.”
Then she was gone, hurrying back down the path, an almost unseemly haste in her usually measured gait.
“…Huh, part of me thought she’d stick around for a bit longer. If only to give me a piece of her mind.”
“Nora,” Jason sighed, turning around to find the woman behind him.
He shouldn’t have been surprised to see her. She’d been backstage with him after all, ready to accept her own award for her heroics in the final hours of the battle of Raknos-Three. Something to do with taking out an exo. With a knife.
Something that sounded more and more comical the more he heard it. Unfortunately, to hear Nora tell it, it hadn’t been particularly comical at all. More just desperate.
“I’m surprised you managed to sneak out after the shit show I caused.” He smirked, before turning serious. “How are things back there?”
The woman shrugged, which he knew from experience was damn hard in Imperial dress uniform. “Oh, about what you'd expect. Our fellow Terran First Vets are confused. And angry. At you. Or the Shil. Or you and the Shil. Or at each other for being angry about the wrong one of the first two.” She partedhands. “It all very nearly turned into a riot when you got dragged off stage by that Shil ape. Fortunately, Friska managed to do some quick talking - and mentioned that you weren’t being arrested. Just taken aside for clarification on your… unexpected statements.”
Jason scoffed. “Taken aside? I was tackled and dragged off stage.”
The Norwegian woman just shrugged again.
“Perhaps if someone had thrown that first punch things might have kicked off? It was on a razor blade for a while there. Fortunately no one seemed willing to be the one to get the ball rolling – and likely get their commission revoked.” She eyed him. “Though with what you just said and did, that might still happen for a number of people.”
This time it was his turn to shrug. “I’m not sorry.”
She sighed, looking off to the side. “I didn’t really expect you to be. And if I’m telling the truth… I don’t really want you to be.”
Jason eyed her as she continued. “Look, you may have been a dumbass in how you went about it, but nothing you said was wrong. From what I’ve seen of the Imperial Marines, they’re a total shitshow compared to the Navy, which I can only see as an unfortunate byproduct of the Imperium’s obsession with naval power to the exclusion of all else. By contrast, the Marines have been left to flounder in the wind. The way I see it, so long as the Marines are at least a single step above the goddamn Militia, the brass are content to let them be.”
Jason nodded absently, truth be told, he’d never looked at it that way. Sure, he’d always known that the Marines were considered little more than an afterthought compared to the Navy, but he’d never really thought of them as akin to being a slightly better trained and equipped version of the Imperial Militia. Who were themselves essentially just the private army of whichever noble owned the territory they were based in.
With all the incredibly disparate and eclectic levels of funding and competence that entailed.
“My point is, we’ve got a war coming. And the Imperium needs to start shaping up before a lot more people die for stupid reasons. I’m hoping your little wakeup call today might be the slap in the face the Imperium needs to inject some goddamn professionalism back into its professional military!”
Jason just stared at the woman who had been actively shouting by the end of her rant. Clearly she’d been keeping a lot of that bottled up in surprise. Obviously he wasn’t the only one who’d been surprised by it either, given the way Nora suddenly flushed, glancing around to make sure no one had heard her.
Fortunately, given it was late evening, and most people present were attending the ‘awards ceremony,’ the Blackstone didn’t have much in the way of foot traffic around.
Content that she just hadn’t blown her career up alongside his, Nora looked back to him. “My point is… good luck Jason. And good work. With all of it.”
Jason could scarcely believe his ears as the woman who he’d thought kind of hated his guts, gave him a very much against protocol salute, before marching back the way she came.
It was only after she’d gotten a few meters away that he shook out of his stupor. “I don’t need luck. You’re the one who's still in the military. You’ll need it more than me. I’m a civilian. I’m on Easy Street now!”
“Some part of me doubts that.” She called back without stopping or turning around. “You’re Chad Novacock. Trouble follows you like a bitch in heat.”
“That’s a ridiculous name! It’ll never catch on.” He scoffed. Of all the ridiculous monikers he’d picked up, the one his fellow veterans had coined – even over Caveman – was the most ridiculous.
As he turned to leave, he also scoffed at her parting words. His ex-bodyguard was wrong. He was on easy street now. His life going forward would be a nice malaise of boredom and safety. Sure, he’d probably cop some kind of crap for his earlier words, but that was it.
There was no law against badmouthing the military – if the person doing so was a civilian. Sure, the Imperium didn’t exactly enshrine free speech, but they weren’t too tyrannical about it either. Because while the Imperium had a hard on for censorship, it was of the more subtle variety. They bought out large news companies and rigged search engine algorithms. They didn’t generally bust down doors and drag people out into the night with a black mask over their head.
Predominantly because there had been a time when the Interior had done just that, and no one wanted to return to those days.
Not even the nobility – which said a lot about just how bad it had been.
So no, he was a free man.
And he was going to enjoy every moment of it.
'…Provided I somehow survive explaining all of this to the other members of my… harem,' he thought.
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“You’re fine with it!?”
Jason most definitely did not shriek. It was a close run thing though.
“I don’t know what else you want us to say?” Raisha opined from her position on their apartment couch.
Next to her, Kernathu nodded absently. “I don’t get why you’re complaining? Do you want us to be mad?”
Of course I don’t, he thought. Do I?
He shook his head, dismissing the thought. No, he didn’t. He just wanted these damn aliens to finally have a reaction he could anticipate, rather than throw him for a loop every time something like this happened.
“Tarcil, please,” Jason said, turning to the alien male. “Be the voice of reason here.”
In his seat, about as far away from the females in the apartment as possible, the effeminate marine cocked an eyebrow. “So, by saying that, you’re tacitly admitting that your actions were entirely unreasonable."
Jason’s mouth shut with a click, before he muttered, “I didn’t say that.”
Tarcil just exhaled noisily. “I’m with the others. I’m not against what you did.” Jason opened his mouth to speak, before the alien overrode him. “I am however, against how you did it. Insulting an Imperial princess? Most of the alumni of the Blackstone? Deeps, a good chunk of the Imperial military? You’ve painted a big target on your back. And by extension, ours.”
Jason had enough shame to be ashamed as he glanced at the floor, even as Raisha and Kernathu started to argue against Tarcil’s assertions. Personally, he agreed with his fellow male. And while he would have liked to say he hadn’t thought of what his actions would do to the people around him, that would be a lie.
He’d thought about it and decided to do it anyway.
Fortunately for him, Tarcil continued on, taking on a slightly commiserating tone. “Still, the event might prove enough of a black eye for the military that they start looking at how much the nobles in their ranks are getting away with.”
Jason cocked his head.
He supposed that there was certainly some truth to that. A lot of the things that had happened to him happened because of people bending or breaking the rules. Some might have found that notion mollifying. Jason wasn’t one of them, to him it was only further infuriating. Because it implied that the Imperium knew said behaviour was wrong and made no effort to correct it, or was utterly ineffective in doing so.
Neither were palatable.
“Oh, like the Iron Tooth!” Raisha pointed out. “They made a lot of changes after that came out.”
Tarci’s mood, which had bordered on contemplative up until her interruption, turned decidedly grim. “Yes. That would be an excellent example.”
Jason almost winced at the other male’s flat tone. He knew he’d copped a lot of shit during his time in the military. For being Human, male or just… him. Now he had to wonder if the same was true for Tarcil?
In that regard, his lack of irritation at Jason’s airing the military’s dirty laundry made a lot more sense. Well that, and the fact that his only male friend had always had his back.
He shook his head, returning his mind to the topic at hand. “So if I’m reading the room correctly, none of you are about to break up with me to avoid the inevitable fallout that’s going to come with my little truth telling session?”
“No!” The shouts from Raisha and Kernathu were almost simultaneous. To such a degree that both looked a little embarrassed by the outburst.
Raisha glanced at her fellow female, before looking back at him. “Look Jason, I’m already a commoner in the exo pilot thingie. I doubt being in a relationship with you is going to make the bullying any worse.”
Jason cocked his head. Huh, I’ve never really thought about that. That’s two people in my life who are apparently also suffering under the Imperium’s issues…
And they were both Shil.
To Raisha’s right, Kernathu shrugged. “Meh, Raisha cops most of the fire for being a commoner from the other cadets. As an engineer I’m pretty beneath the notice of the noble bloods. I doubt that’ll change.”
Jason nodded slowly, before almost turning to where Yaro usually sat – only to remember that she wasn’t there. Hell, even before their little heart to heart the other night, the Rakiri woman had taken to sleeping elsewhere.
Which was wise, because it had kept her name almost entirely out of the news when the reporters had shown up.
Or are they Paparazzi? he wondered.
To be honest, he wasn’t totally sure of the difference. What he did know was that he had a sizable number of them camped outside his door. They’d shown up a few hours ago and had yet to leave.
It was more than a little unnerving for a man that had been hoping to escape the limelight. Instead, it seemed he’d only made it worse. Because, while his fame hadn’t gained much traction outside of military circles, his quitting of those circles certainly had.
At least on Shil.
Even a casual perusal of the data-net had seen his face pasted across dozens of new channels. Which had been surprising – but not nearly as surprising that some of those channels seemed to be, if not in his favor, at least sympathetic to the issues he’d raised.
Part of him liked to believe that was due to the legitimacy of his complaints, but a darker side of him couldn’t help but wonder if it didn’t have something to do with his gender.
Of course, a ‘few news channels’ weren’t much in the grand scheme of things. Most were lambasting his actions and ‘disrespect’. Still, enough were in his favour that there was an argument rather than universal condemnation. Hell, he’d even seen a few ex-service members echoing his sentiments in interviews – albeit with much more delicate language.
The amount of discussion he’d managed to generate might have been heartening, if it weren’t for the fact that he didn’t want anything to do with any of it.
He was out of the game now. He’d made his stand. He’d saved some lives. He’d given his post-career review; two stars, poon was nice but did not justify the risk to life and limb.
Now he just wanted to slink away. Back to the quiet normal life he’d been on-track to enjoy before he’d been dumb enough to punch a marine in the face – and get recorded doing so.
Unfortunately, the universe didn’t seem quite so keen to let go of him.
Here’s hoping Tarcil’s right and this all blows over the moment the next scandal or big story comes along, he thought.
Which hopefully wouldn’t take too long. “Man Insults Princess!” had a nice ring to it, but it had nothing on the possibility of war on the horizon. Already stories were circulating about the Imperium and Alliance moving to a war footing. His little scandal might have momentarily interrupted that story, but soon enough the media would switch back to talking about the coming conflict.
A conflict that was looking to be the biggest in galactic history, with this being the first time two superpowers were going to war.
He had no doubt the Consortium would be looking on gleefully from the sidelines, looking to sell to both sides and pour fuel on the fire wherever they could. They only stood to benefit from their two main rivals weakening each other. Which was what had kept the uneasy peace for so long. The fact that if any two powers started fighting, the third would be able to tip the scale in either direction.
Unfortunately, with the events of Raknos-Three, the Imperium was required to respond. They literally couldn’t choose not to. Not unless the Empress wanted to take a massive hit to her prestige. No, black flag operation or not, the Alliance had committed an act of war and the Empress was obligated to respond.
And they knew for a fact that it was the Alliance now.
According to Friska, one of the prisoners had finally broken. How she’d found out about it he didn’t know, nor did he want to. All that mattered was that they’d found what the Edixi had been doing on Raknos-Three, and how they’d planned to escape with an Imperial fleet in orbit.
Apparently, like they’d suspected, the Roach attack had merely been bait for an Imperial response. Once the Imperial relief force arrived and were sufficiently committed, the Edixi had broken out their new jamming system. One adapted to make use of the unique environment of Raknos to be as effective as possible.
Then they’d set to work.
Testing weapons.
For the inevitable conflict with the Imperium.
Talk about a self-fulfilling prophecy, he thought.
It made him sick. All those people that had died. They’d died as part of a field test. A field test that had now guaranteed that the thing that it was to prepare for was now going to happen.
Much sooner than he imagined anyone in the Alliance – or the Imperium for that matter – would have liked. Imperium was still consolidating its conquests, Earth included, and the Alliance was still standardizing. Though to be fair, that had been the case for the entirety of its existence.
Unlike the Imperium, the Alliance wasn’t a monolith. It contained lots of voices and agendas.
What was that saying? The cow is the racehorse designed by committee? He shook his head.
As for how the Edixi were to escape? That was simple. A few weeks after Jason’s escape, and mere hours after Imperial reinforcements had shown up in-system in force, a Roach pirate fleet had jumped in.
…And promptly jumped out again after seeing the force arrayed against it.
Still, it was clear for all to see that the pirates had been the Edixi’s intended extraction plan.
While it was near impossible to force an engagement in space with an enemy that didn’t want one – they’d just run in the opposite direction – they could have forced the Imperial fleet out of orbit long enough for them to extract their people and the Alliance special forces, before jumping from the system. Leaving the Imperial fleet powerless to stop them, and utterly ignorant of the fact that there’d been Alliance troops on the ground at all.
To Jason’s eyes it was a plan that seemed fraught with risk for gains that could have been imitated – if to a lesser degree – with wargames. The timing of the Roach fleet’s arrival, for example, seemed incredibly late. Late enough that it suggested there’d been some issue there. Which he supposed was only to be expected when you based your super-secret black ops operation around the timeliness and professionalism of pirates and terrorists.
He could only wonder what the heads of the Alliance had been thinking when they’d cooked this plan up? Hell for all he knew, it hadn’t even been the heads of the alliance. Just some black-ops spook that had overreached.
Regardless, war was now inevitable.
He glanced around the table.
And the people with me will be right in the middle of it, he thought.
“So what are you going to do?” Raisha asked suddenly, jolting him from his thoughts. The alien woman had a small smirk on her face as she eyed him. “Settle down and be a house-husband for us?”
Jason just shook his head and laughed, much to her poorly concealed disappointment. “Ha, no. I’d go crazy in a week.”
Though that begged the question, what did he want to do? It was funny, he’d spent what felt like months thinking about nothing more than escaping the military… but now that he was out? He had no idea what he should do.
Go back to Earth? He thought. Not a chance. I’d be killed in a week by some nutjob freedom-fighter after being labeled as a collaborator. Stay in the Imperium? He shook his head. That’s probably not a good idea either. I’ve just pissed off an Imperial princess… Perhaps I could lie low on one of the border worlds?
Gurathu would probably be happy to see him…
“You could try the periphery?”
Every eye in the room locked onto Tarcil at his quiet suggestion.
Naturally, Raisha was the first to speak. “The Periphery!? Are you insane?”
The alien male shot his fellow Shil the stink eye. “I’m not. If you’d let me finish, I’ll explain why.”
As if dismissing her completely, he turned back to Jason. “The Periphery might have a bad reputation – much of it well earned – but I spent the last few months on a posting out there. And it’s not as bad as it sounds. Mostly. While much of it’s a mess, there’s plenty of safe worlds out there that are Imperial aligned.”
Jason resisted the urge to snort. Imperial aligned just meant that while they were still technically sovereign nations, they were in the process of being diplomatically annexed by the Imperium. One military base or ‘trading post’ at a time. In the same fashion as the British Empire did way back in the colonial era.
Still, underhanded or not, the Imperium would take a firm hand to any pirate admiral or warlord who decided to try and take a swipe at a world they had interest in. That was the only reason those otherwise sovereign nations tolerated Imperial troops operating on their worlds.
“Worlds like that, they’re desperate for skilled… anything really.” Tarcil continued. “But they’re especially eager for people familiar with Imperial tech.”
From across the room, Kernathu made a considering noise. “Being on the frontier would keep you safe from the Interior, military and ornery nobles.” She paused, ignoring the betrayed look Raisha was sending her way. “Or at least, safer.”
“Safer?” Jason deadpanned.
The look his fellow engineer sent him was somehow even flatter. “You were the one that insulted an Imperial princess, not me. Safe is relative.”
Well… he couldn’t argue that.
“The Periphery, eh?” he said, ignoring Raisha’s pout.
He couldn’t deny the idea appealed. It was an opportunity to get out from under the Imperium’s thumb. And some part of him was excited to see a world that didn’t belong to the Imperium. There’d be new races. New technology. And an opportunity to see those things in a setting where he wasn’t either shooting at them or being shot at by them.
Most importantly, his skills would finally be useful.
He turned back to eye the rest of the room. “Well, I suppose it’s worth a shot.”
After all, what was the worst that could happen?
Comments
mraanonymous
Damn. I was hoping for a three-some between jason, Raisha, and Kernathu. Something for fanfiction.
Chaos Devil
Don't get me wrong, I love the story I love it so very much, but I really hope Jason and Yaro can patch things up. It would kill a little part of me to have lost my favorite lion-wolf Woman.
mullerman1970
I love this story, this is why i became a patreon,
Tastfulfate
I loved yaro
O911
I wonder if Tracil is member of the wider imperial family and cousin of the insulted princess...
Yackaban
Matt is a good DM but he tends to let them get away with a lot of shit simply because it's entertaining
Michael Clancy
Man. Can't belive its over. Amazing job! And especially amazing how many other stories its spawned covering so many different issues! Really well done. Can't wait to see the next story!
Shorlas Magaskawee
I went into the show with next to zero experience with critical role as well. But I am a D&D player, several games a week. I am also a DM, several games a week. I run a D&D community that has 15 other DMs all working out of a shared world. So I went in with the understanding that this is a celebrity show with a rabid fandom and whatever happens in the show people are going to try to bring to my shared world community because Matt Mercer is proclaimed by his fans as the messiah of D&D. So... when I see the first two episodes and how the party won..... I've never seen a cheaper victory in any story writing in all my life. I can't say much more without shattering spoiler friendly expectations but... oh boy.
Blue Fishcake
Really? While I appreciate the vote of confidence, everything I've seen of the reception to Vox Machine makes it out to be pretty great. I've no experience with Critical Role or anything like that, but I was kind of looking forward to watching it. P.S. And yes, I'm slowly but surely editing SSB while also working on the Cleff scene.
Shorlas Magaskawee
please, oh please, tell me you got more coming for us. I just made the mistake of watching The Legend of Vox Machina. I desperately need some better plot to cleanse my mind with.
Blue Fishcake
Apologies, during December/January I was working on the epilogue, which ended up being about 7.5 k words, which equated to 2.5 chapters. As a result I wasn't releasing on the usual schedule. Right now SSB is on pause while I edit book three for amazon release and plan out the next book.
Found&Lost
It wasn't too bad of a letdown for me, still the ending was a bit...meh. Here's my views on it -Yaro... was not my favorite. I'm probably in the minority there, but she just seemed so... simple -I do greatly regret not seeing Cleffs last stand and immediate aftermath (those tankers were awesome) -Seeing Chat Novacock go head to head with a princess would have been interesting.. and I'd wish that I'd seen it. However, the way he mic dropped left has me thinking that he has blackholeballs to go along with the novacock. -I'm actually excited to see more of the universe so I don't mind him departing as much. The tiefling drow were interesting and it'd be hard to see more of them from within the imperium.
Found&Lost
Is the SSB update schedule changing? It seems to me that several expected release dates were missed in December and January. If you can't do the 1/week that you used to (at least when I started) that's fine, I just want to know so I'm not checking in every few hours every Tuesday for something that doesn't come.
Blue Fishcake
A bit late to respond to this, but I can fix one of those issues. As soon as I posted that chapter, I knew I'd missed a beat by killing Cleff offscreen. Hence why I'm planning on writing another chapter from her pov of her final stand. Obviously I'll be putting that in the correct place in the book, but I'll also post it here as a 'bonus chapter'.
Thenais
"Hell maybe just a good old fashioned Assassination attempt" on the princess, with jason saving the day ?
Thenais
we will see how it goes from here, but this volume was a let down. - yaro left - Cleff got killed offscreen and summed up in a sentence. - he could have influenced the princess into giving better living condition for all mankind ...
Julien Barrette
I came for the poon. I stayed for the Saga of Chad Novacock.
SteelWings
I weap for Yaro leaving, but it made sense for her character. Maybe she'll pop up again during a patrol of the Periphery? But I can't wait to see where Chad Novacock's story goes from here ^^ Bring on the dragon like woman!
Shorlas Magaskawee
I have my card out ready to buy the ebook!
Zeoncobra
After all, what was the worst that could happen? Jason, you should know better than to temp Murphy. What I'm most looking forward to on the next book is that we are finally going to see more of the SSB universe than just the Imperium.
Vermontsc6
Fucking tits! Great writing bro keep this up!
Tim Speller
Perhaps we might even see more of glow mommy?
Taylor Tilbury
"After all, whats the worst that could happen?" Oh I don't know Jason. Pirate Raids, Black Bag Ops, Spy Ops from other powers to make the imperium spread themselves too thin, wars between periphery worlds/nations, Hell, maybe one or even both of the other major powers will want to nab you so you can possibly help them 'Liberate' earth. (Edit) Hell maybe just a good old fashioned Assassination attempt. And that's just the things that can happen to You specifically.
Patrick Ambrose
I would love to see Tissi pop back up. That would be great!
White Neko Knight
I wonder how long Jason will stay free of the military. He's shown to much skill and charisma to be left alone.
Aaron Floyed
Chapter 1 of Arc #2...i can see it now. Jason out on the edge of known space getting comfortable with his new life...A certain Captain Tissi pops up with a directive from the Princess. He is most definitely not forgotten more forgiven and in fact played right into her hands as head of special opps for the Empire.....Bring on Arc #2
Jacob Ward
Great Chapter. Hard to top that last chapter, I'd never been as hype with this series as I was last chapter. This follow up worked pretty well, I'd say, although I'd been hoping to see the Princesses' response and pov on the situation.
Gerben van Essen
she is a loyal imperium dog!... cat... dogcat woman!
Ripley Riley
Good chapter. We knew Yaro would be pissed about being knocked out and it's time to cycle out characters for the next book so someone had to be retired. Glad Tarcil got some screen time! We haven't seen or heard from him in a long time. I hope he's more prominent in the next book. The motivations for all three Shil'vati to remain with Jason made perfect sense, btw. Glad for that. I was worried they would all get supremely offended by Jason's (hypocritical) rant about the Imperium. And, it's as they said, maybe this will motivate the Imperium to take a good look at itself and make measured changes. I also want to say: I'm glad you characterized the Imperium as slowly changing for the better, "With each passing decade, more and more power is allocated to the common woman. More and more of the nobility’s protections get repealed", because the Imperium was starting to sound cartoonishly bad.
JT
Ah famous last words
Sol Dragonbane
I feel that the worst that could happen to Jason would probably be that the imperial princess became even more intrigued with him after his rant and spared no effort to recruit him.
Felipe Agudelo
Love your work man. Keep it up! Cant wait to see the periphery and maybe news about him reach earth and how he insulted the princess? Would love to see what earths reaction is. Either way great writing as always!
Matt Bradock
It's been an honor, reading this all the way. I got hooked when I ran across the first couple chapters on r/hfy and every cent I spent on Patreon was well worth it. Getting some good story with some pancakes on top, was really nice. Don't stop writing.
Hunter Joseph
I really hope we get yaro back in the future, she was my favorite and was obviously best girl
Crit Happens
Will old faces make returns in the next arch?
Adam Rosenberg
Also when are we gonna see more time with Raisha and Kernathu?! Preferably Not PG-13
Adam Rosenberg
So I'm guessing some new alien babes are coming into the picture in The Periphery. Any bets on morphology?
Moreno
Thank you for this beautiful chapter. It's been a great experience so far. It's a bit sad that he and Yaro broke up, but i could see it coming. That's life. Thank you and have a nice time.
Christopher Manoff
That's that good stuff, if not bittersweet. It is unfortunate that Yaro and Jason split... but it was inevitable. Can't wait to see where Jason's story goes next. Another great read, my friend.
Zac The Lizard
Well, I certainly saw Yaro and Jason going their opposite ways. It sucks, but the two of them are direct opposites and will only cause friction by staying together. Can't wait to see where Jason decides to go though. Amazing work as always Blue!
Blue Fishcake
It is I am afraid. Counting is hard. Also, thanks :D
Duncan Sharp
Please tell me that 83 isn't a typo. Because if it isn't, we get another chapter. Beginning this now anyway because I love your content you wonderful monster made of cliffhangers and political suspense.
