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Sexy Sect Babes: Chapter Four

🕑 Added 2022-02-21 09:45:37 +0000 UTC

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Darth

As much as I miss your space narrative I am looking forward to how this one turns out

Ripley Riley

I'm in the same boat as ATXAdventures.

ATXAdventures

I enjoyed the first few chapters but the setting and dynamic really aren't doing much for me. I'll probably end up skipping this one. Either way, thanks for sharing your stories!

Jamie King

So it's an Isekai mixed with Factorio. I'm definitely ok with that.

Allen Mainville

You know, I’m not quite sure how this will end for Jack (regarding Guo An). On the one hand, if he keeps this up (this being showing off how much he knows about that suit and how awesome it is) by the time the reveal comes, she might not be willing to kill him for his deception. On the other hand, if he keeps this up, it’s also likely that she gets extremely pissed that he’s some mortal who duped her into thinking he was a godlike man with absurd power (like making gold appear from seemingly nowhere), and tear him limb from limb. Either way, this is sure to be entertaining!

Matt Bradock

That production line problem does bring up the frustrating memories from Satisfactory.

Orion Dye

Then in that case it’s not really a kingdom builder story so much as a story with elements of kingdom building in it. It may seem like a trivial difference, but it is important as there are people who would pick up this story thinking it’s the former then put it down disappointed because it’s the latter. To avoid that it would be good to make sure the author makes the distinction early in the story to prevent negative review from disappointed expectations down the line.

Orion Dye

In Xianxia setting power rules supreme. If he did that then he’d be either killed or enslaved by some sect as soon as they heard about him. His “inventions” would never see the light of day because they would empower mortals, which the cultivators in power wouldn’t want. Better the be a tree in the forest rather than a cactus in a desert.

Thatguycant

why doesn't he just pass himself off as a genius inventor I feel like that would be way easier.

White Neko Knight

Well sure if you're going full 4X expansion and deep dive into the nitty-gritty of management it would be difficult. But you could gloss over a lot of it and only focus on the key details of the Kingdom. Significant technologies, major decisions, and Important people are all you really need to cover.

Orion Dye

Can’t speak for author, but based on their other works it’s unlikely. That being said Im welcome to be surprised. Not that I’d blame them if they don’t, it’s hard to work in all the exposition, tech progression, and endless management of a proper kingdom builder into a story with its own plot, characterization, and progression. Might be too much for an author whose only on their second work? Maybe, we’ll see.

White Neko Knight

Oh? Is this a proper kingdom builder novel? I'm getting more and more excited for this.


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