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Sexy Sect Babes: Chapter Fourteen

🕑 Added 2022-04-27 22:21:49 +0000 UTC

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Reverb

Poor An.

Arkyrion

Ah, Rourke's Drift. Good movie. Kinda surprised that no one raised questions at the presence of so many humans. The British may have been hiding their animal traits under their clothes, but the Zulu clothing doesn't leave much to the imagination.

Christopher Dasenbrock

Instructions unclear, found a fish eating a moldy blue cake.

Blue Fishcake

I'm alive, I've just been... struggling with this chapter. Have no fear, it shall arrive in a few hours :D

notreal name

ok, we need to organize a search party.

notreal name

that's seven days then, everything ok fishcake?

Jon Transfiguracion

Sect luvin!

SteelWings

Magnificent.

Blue Fishcake

More often than not, it's a mistake :D

Orion Dye

It’s possible, but at this stage of the story we’d have seen other examples of stuff like that if he was prone to it. More likely it’s just a writing mistake.

Orion Dye

An was as riveted by any of the mortals present by the ‘movie’. Replace “by” with “as”. Otherwise it implies The cultivator was riveted by mortals, which is unlikely given your worldbuilding.

Folly Industries

The right/right could be a phonic thing for how he's actually speakin'

Orion Dye

Can’t say it rightly sits right with me to just take the crust from a man’s mouth without due recompense.” You use rightly twice here, should only be one.

Orion Dye

As did the audible splat as what he liked to think was his shot hit at it hit his target. “Hit” is stated twice in this section. Should only be once.

notreal name

Naw you did okay, seven days isn't five but its better than it could be. Keep it up sport.

PalindromeJoe

Lovely chapter as always!

Julien Barrette

don’t sweat the delays, Blue. You can’t rush greatness.


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