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Sexy Sect Babes: Chapter Twenty Four

🕑 Added 2022-07-29 13:15:05 +0000 UTC

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Alex LordThorsen

“Then it works in our favor. A crafter will be a weaker in straight combat than a dedicated warrior.” => “Then it works in our favor. A crafter will be weaker in straight combat than a dedicated warrior.” thought straight feels like the wrong adjective given the character. Maybe martial combat?

anonymous

"blood-ties oft mak things worse" => "blood-ties oft make things worse"

Christian White

I will be eagerly checking every 30 seconds for the notification tomorrow morning!

Blue Fishcake

Well, once more I've got enough for a chapter, but as ever my first two parts have ended up going over the 3k threshold. I could post it up now regardless, but the chapter would feel pretty incomplete without the third and final part of it. I'm starting to fall asleep at my keyboard as usual though. So I'm going to hit the sack soon and then try and get this finished tomorrow morning. As ever, thanks for your patience with my tardy ass. On the bright side, the chapter should end between 4 and 5 thousand words, so technically you're getting 1.5 chapters :P

Vlad Cold

Because mining explosives specially designed to be impact-insensitive, and prospective detonators for mining do not use primers, for they are much safer without it. Also, primer production is not that simple, for slightest impurity greatly affects sensitivity in positive as well as negative way. Refining it's production is royal pain.

Argamenta

a lot of the "weapons" hes using are repurposed mining equipment. timed charges and general purpose drones are normal mining equipment vs an impact trigger that is explicitly used as a weapon.

Rodney the Paladin

Oh, that's actually easy. He's not thinking logically because he's the only guy with the know how.

kai graham

how do you re-invent the primer but cannot work out impact triggered explosives

Triggering Troll

Yeah, killing off half of your forces including some of your strongest when your about to face an unknown enemy and are surrounded by killer beasts wasn't such a good idea now does it dum-dum?

Darth

I'm looking forward to either Ren or Lin finding out he isn't a cultivator and how they react! I know it likely won't be soon but, it'll be a good dramatic pay off when it does. (I imagine some amount of catharsis too)

Joshua Whitmore

I enjoyed this chapter. From a plot device standpoint, I would recommend that they lose more of the disciples. By letting the bombing take two of them out and the beasts take more. Having it be a chain reaction of bombs weaken then beast swoop is right in line with the luck factor that our MC has had so far. once again loved the chapter but thats my two cents

Arkyrion

Is Lin present in the Control room, or is it meant to be An? Also, and I hate to be this guy, "martial" is an adjective meaning "related to war or combat." "Marshal" (or alternatively Marshall) is a noun denoting a title, or a verb meaning to command or gather, as in "marshal your forces for combat."

Exec_Jack

The answer to this failure of force majeure against his foes merely means that he must apply more force! Bigger Bombs! :D Also excellent chapter Wordsmith! I'm eagerly awaiting the next, although I do hope you take the time you need to tend to your own health. The lurgy is a most insidious disease...

Jon Transfiguracion

He needs to blow their brains out. Hard but simple.

Superpa

Another great power of the hidden master is something called : Spicy pancakes

Jason Hornbuckle

Mine fields!

Ramon Diaz

Well if we are talking Dragon Ball, then our main man Jack needs to turn himself into an android like 17. And he needs to do it quick.

Andrew

Thank you!

Mr von Twistern

He needs some Naphalm

Marcin

Boom....

Allen Mainville

A shame the bombing run didn’t result in more damage, but given that cultivators seem to be as sturdy as the average Ki-user in Dragon Ball / Dragon Ball Z, two is a decent count.

Blue Fishcake

Oh thank god. I was worried quality had suffered as a result of a large chunk of this being written when I was feeling... groggy. I definitely didn't want to rewrite (more of) it though, given things were already running behind schedule.

PalindromeJoe

Another amazing chapter wordsmith!

blaze87b

Knew there was a reason I was awake at 6am on my day off


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