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Chapter 147 - A Path Decided

🕑 Added 2024-10-15 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Mark Corwin

I thought his space affinity was 40% from the first book.

Beggar of Freedom

Divines bless your kind heart!

Ellake

I added this in. Should be in there right after Aisling/Evindal start talking.

BloodStorm

I’m surprised Nate didn’t say one thing to them about the guard inspector dude that wanted to arrest them just minutes before then a princess stepping in to save them. Walking the political landscape they are walking that is a big deal

Ellake

Close. It's hard to do without ruining a big reveal down the line. But I do need to establish it a bit more. He goes into his reasoning in the next chapter, but I do try and foreshadow these decisions. Seems I was too vague this time. Will definitely add more in the edit.

Secret Weapons

yeah I think the connection between Art/Creating and Life just isn't well established. Maybe some more musing on Life being created by something etc. Something that connects the two a bit better... maybe him creating little tiny golems to test something.. essentially "creating life" in a way. That's assuming I understood his reason for picking it correctly.

Ellake

Thanks for the feedback. I'll go back and check and make sure there is a little more foreshadowing in the edit.

Secret Weapons

This whole Lord of Life choice makes zero sense and came completely out of nowhere. If you were trying to hint at it at all before this chapter, you failed.

Ellake

It's explained partially in the next chapter.

Ellake

It's in the next chapter.

Ellake

This would a good call out and an oversight by me. I've edited the chapter and added it in.

John Smith

Largely agree with the points about the Lord of Life class feeling like left field and the lack of discussion of the inspector/princess stuff. This is serial, so in book for it it’s addressed in the next chapter or two, I see how it can flow. But yeah, it feels weird right now to me. Love the story and looking forward to what comes next

Jason Hardman

I vaguely recall that during his second class choice options there was a healing related one due to him practically bringing Kiri back from the dead.

Jason Hardman

Definitely. It doesn't fit that he wouldn't at least mention it, especially as counter action is likely to be necessary.

Zack

Rough guess, he's playing on his conceptual automation to give his creations more 'life' so to speak

Nim

Where did this Lord of Life idea come from? Did I miss it somewhere? Seems like it's out of left field.

LitLeveler

Okay, need help creating a time machine to go get more chapters a bring them back. This book is amazing!

ambullseye

YES!!!. with the inspector AND with Royalty. Especially as he is talking with 2 of his biggest backers AND the conversation started with how he was over-confident and would be more careful Maybe i am too paranoid but to me i would have imagined. mentioning the Inspector would be first then that leads to the Princess and getting feed back on how she operates and then might lead to a tangent to ask about her Concept. Once those were done and maybe having the 2 platinum adventures cutting the princess concept discussion short (either it being to technical for their current chat or them not knowing) and then the conversation would go back to what the meeting was originally about.

ReadingObsessed

Anyone else feel he should have brought up his run in with the bribed inspector?

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.


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