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Chapter 150 - Those Who Wander

🕑 Added 2024-10-22 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Thanks for the chapter. Not sure about this bit: "Originally the plan had been for a four-person team" I think that we saw the original plan in chapter 136... and it was for a *six*-person team, not a four-person team. The Duchess says (Chapter 136): "We send a Kill Squad. A team of six. All second evolution with at least a partial Embodiment." Unless the plan that the Duchess unveilled to her husband in chapter 136 wasn't the original plan. There was a gap of an hour between her reading the report from the twins, and her presenting a plan to her husband - perhaps during this hour she made a plan for a four-person team, then changed it to a six-person team.

GoodMornin2U2

Thank you for the chapter :)

Eleeyah

I enjoyed the chapter a lot. <3 --- Focusing his senses he stripped the space between himself and the flicker, gazing upon the small room and the simplistic affinity measuring enchantment. --- I'm assuming that he saw Nate getting measured? Or is it the copy he's building for himself? Could use a touch of clarification. ^^ --- His eyes widened slightly at what he saw and for a moment he paused, mentally calculating the risks, costs and potential rewards of interference. “Sooner than expected…too soon really…” he muttered to himself, before sealing his senses and returning them to his immediate environs. “No. It’s not worth the cost. The mortal’s path is his own.” --- And this is *just* a touch too mysterious to be properly engaging. Like, I have no clue what the interference is supposed to be, therefore I know that whatever guess I make will be meaningless, therefore I'm just gonna move on and not bother in the first place. But if the plot can afford it, one sentence to imply what the interference would be would work massively towards engaging the imagination. Suddenly I can guess at something that feels like I might be correct. :)

Jamison Schneider

"mom"

BloodStorm

Well is Evindal going to die? Why have the mage gaurd the kids? Well looking forward to the battle

Ellake

Fixed. Thanks!

David Adoram-Kershner

Personally with Garnet's wish to see a Phoenix being revealed to us. I would love that if she were to fall in battle that the fading image of the victor she ends up finding her Phoenix...

Rohin Ghosh

She's the mom of the unseen twins

Jakob

Who the heck is the duchess again? She's completely slipped my mind

Kanyau

Really hope he doesn't try to play hero with his adventurer companions and he and Kiri just flee... On the other hand... achievements?

Jason Hardman

TYFTC! Unusual phrasing in the following, not sure if it was intended? The Kill-Squad she had put together was more than enough to handle the children, but would be killed, in no uncertain times, by any of the children's three protectors. -> "in no uncertain terms" would be more normal phrasing here. I see classic villain error in assuming that the things you might want would be what your supposed enemy wants too. It would surprise me if Nate wanted any noble titles or responsibilities. Especially in this tyrannical and corrupt country.

Avdrdr

He’s also found ways to prevent others from stopping them with countertop their abilities. It wasn’t stated what else he worked on.

Kedar

I hope nate took inspiration from hie improvised bunker with the demons and took the time to make a portable one he dump out of his ring. I assume that was part of his development with concentrated mana.


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