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Chapter 162 - Divisive Tribunal

🕑 Added 2024-11-19 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Jason Hardman

I got the sense of it, but the sentence just feels off to me. A lot of my English grammar is instinct as it's my native language, and there's something jarring I'm struggling to put my finger on here. Not the end of the world, it's just a suggestion for review.

Connor Mcharg

No, that looks fine to me - he’s saying he could get his farsight through those wards, but doing so would raise the alarms.

Secret Weapons

Huh... this illusion chick seems rather interesting. Hopefully next chapter they can have a down low convo under Illusion while everyone else babbles away

Jason Hardman

Interesting persona in Avery. Have we met them before? I'm sort of wondering if she's the princess using a disguise to become part of the Guild, if that's even feasible.

Jason Hardman

TYFTC! Following sentence could benefit from some changes, I believe: He had considered trying to listen in on any preliminary discussions, but the warding on the room kept his Farsight of the Runic Artist Skill from penetrating the walls without raising alarms. The "without raising alarms" part doesn't follow from the the prior section cleanly. Guessing it was part of a different phrasing that got dropped, or some connecting words were missed?

Felix Tomiak

Thanks for the chapter!

Frank Armand

Oh I like this Porter guy..... if all politicians could hold themselves the same as he did the world would be a better place, maybe not a paradise but at least if some country wanted your ressources they will simply say they want it and take it....instead of the bs about trying to make one self justified

Signspace

Alais couldn't be more obviously biased unless she wrote "NOBLE ASPIRANT" on her forehead.

James Squibb

Morgaine?


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