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Chapter 165 - Spy Trade

🕑 Added 2024-11-26 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Gerald Monroe

You know, the obvious thing for Nate to make sooner or later is runecrafted equipment that prints other runecrafted equipment. Possibly done through a chain of nana powered machines like a material upgrader, a rune press, a mill, etc.

TerrestrialOverlord

Kiri is fucking terrifying, guess you have to be at least that protective with people messing with you and your family... I can see her becoming a spider 🕷️..a very dangerous spider. Patient, cool, even tempered and completely ruthless. People will soon learn to fear the soul spider.

Secret Weapons

If the war is a concern, move to a neighbouring kingdom for a few months first lol. Also, almost none of their mentors have a tie to this kingdom, they are all Guild people first and foremost, half aren't even from here. Also, it was cool to learn that Avery is Luc's side piece lol didn't see that coming, but it helps explain why she was so cool during the trial.

Jason Hardman

As I understand it Asmuisil is more of a Republic than a Kingdom, and I think they've got good reason to be cautious and distant at this point in the game. Unfortunately, if Nate and Kiri up and left now they'd likely be in even more danger than they currently are. It'd be seen as some kind of colluding with the enemy, now there's a war on. On the whole I agree that the current kingdom is just a horrible place they'd be well done with. They've gained some benefits though, from the University and such. They have ties due to their relationships with their mentors and Kiri's family, that also make it difficult to break away from where they are for now.

Jason Hardman

I'd say the first comma is extraneous. The rest seems fine to me.

Secret Weapons

This other Kingdom seems way chiller... Part of me is struggling to see the benefits of hanging around their current spot long term. This Kingdom kinda sucks ass in comparison... only their mana stealing set up makes it worth staying... and it seems like soon they'll be loaded enough that that's not really a major concern anymore. Hope they eventually grab Kiri's parents and their various cool friends and bounce hard. Leave these chumps to chump it up

Errind

TFTC, This sentence feels weird "Now, that, she thought, would be an absolute coup." It feels choppy, it doesn't really emphasis any of the words but instead like the sentence is semi interrupted

Mark Corwin

Great chapter. Can we get like 10 bonus chapters for the long weekend? 🙏 🙏 🙏

thisisniall

Love the Luc POV as a little break!


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