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Chapter 246 - Grand Runic Array

🕑 Added 2025-06-01 20:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Ellake

I'll look at reworking the plan/reasoning to better align with Nate's penchant for preparation.

Michael

TFTC! I do have a couple of issues with Nate's plan, though. First, why would he assume that creating the artifact will summon Lesser Divines to his location here? On Galle, the pure influx of 80 Divine Energy (if you only count one ascension) was enough to summon all the (Lesser) Divines on that planet. In this wild realm, Kiri spent 50 Divine Energy on raising skills after they got to Pinoreth (Chapter 242), and Nate spent 30 Divine Energy to raise his Barrier Sigil to Divine while also getting a huge influx of Divine Energy from the concepts of the Heart of the Sea at the Temple of Depths Walkers, at least enough to "instantly replenish" what he spent, which was after he was afraid that his container for Divine Energy would fill up and Divine Energy be wasted (Chapter 244). That means he spent 30 Divine Energy and had an influx of at least 64 Divine Energy. If neither of those situations, where they didn't even consider other Divines finding them, was enough to summon even one Lesser Divine, why would now be different? Higher energy density, larger distances, etc could all play a factor. Second, especially if he is afraid of alerting other Divines, why wouldn't he take the time to space things out a bit? Raising one sigil to Divine has already been proven to not be a big enough deal, so he could e.g. raise one sigil a day or something like that before attempting to create the actual artifact. That should reduce the risk considerably. Or even raise all three at the same time, spending 90 Divine Energy, which would be pretty instantaneous and a good litmus test, so he could then support Kiri in case any actually show up. He even considers not doing everything at once but discards it based on flawed reasoning, as he conflates raising the sigils with the actual artifact creation. Just because he uses multiple steps doesn't mean he has to use his spatial realm to do so. Third, raising the sigils first would free up some of his Divine Energy reservoir. Either bartering for renewed access to the Heart of the Sea or one of the other remaining Divine artifacts could let him discover more concepts from them, allowing him to fill up that reservoir once more to create more of a safety margin, both for creating the artifact and for supporting Kiri in case of any Divines actually showing up. The current path means that the artifact creation could fail completely if he underestimated how much Divine Energy he needs to raise the two materials, which he has never attempted before and has no better estimate for than his gut feeling, plus any Divine Energy he might need for the actual creation of the artifact, which he hasn't addressed at all. All in all, this plan is unnecessarily risky and poorly thought out. It incorporates flawed reasoning and assumptions based on Galle, not their current location or experiences. I mean, as a reader, I can see that this is at least partly the case to trigger another fight or at least confrontation with Lesser Divines, as well as create additional tension and maybe flaws based on resource shortage during the artifact creation but my hope is that these can be incorporated another way that better fits Nate's supposed character as an astute planner.

Connor Mcharg

I think he’s offering to protect Nate above and beyond his contract’s requirements - yes, fully manifesting does mean he’s *actually* at risk, but it also means that he has an expanded skillset (specifically, he can use both his skills and Nate’s).

Jason Hardman

With all the asides at the end there it becomes confused as to what Frick is offering to balance the debt between them. If I'm reading it correctly, Frick is agreeing to put his actual life on the line as part of his contract with Nate. Not sure that that's actually beneficial to Nate in the end, because it means he won't come back if he gets killed like he currently can. Not without his own Divine Rebirth option at least.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Heck of a tease. Looking forward to the next one.

nicolas

What a cliff hanger ^^


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