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Chapter 172 - A Dungeon Too Simple

🕑 Added 2024-12-12 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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nicolas

Ok, make sense. though it's kind of strange. If they broke their oath, Evindal woul get like one level max and Nate and Kiri would not get any boost to help them with the consequences.

Jennifer Leigh

I think it would be Selfloathing. Remember that spark of hatred? Also, she has been conditioned her entire life to do what her mother wants. It's also a cultural foundation, at least in the powerful in Etrua. Just look at Null and the twins.

Jennifer Leigh

Evindal did that one

nicolas

Doesn't he also have a contract with Britt and Null ?

Kanyau

It's selfish because that person let her girlfriend walk oblivious into a situation more dangerous than she realizes, all for HER sake, knowing that the backlash would hit not just her gf, but their family. All she'd have needed to say was some version of, 'you might get caught up in my troubles'. Or 'this could put a bigger target on your back' or something. Instead she denied, and continues to deny Kiri (and Nate by proxy) the choice. Coralie isn't stupid, she simply isn't even making an effort to safeguard the woman who marched to war to protect her.

Ellake

Thanks for the kind words Dan! I have to give some credit of course to the betas who help me fix any chapters before they go out. They make sure I don't slip up (too much).

Dan M

TYFTC! You're such a machine, they're always on time and always your best effort. You make my Mondays survivable, my Wednesdays enjoyable, and Friday always leaves me torn between wishing I could skip the weekend for one more chapter or fiendishly obsessing over my own creations, inspired by Nate. Thanks for embodying a professional author from day one!

Firstname Lastname

Unless it’s intentional, “clamp up” and “clamped up” should be “clam up” and “clammed up”.

Ellake

Fixed. Thank you.

TerrestrialOverlord

But her focus on Stabs Orbs for Intellect -> But her focus on Stat Orbs for Intellect

Gustavo Claude

How a person who is sacrificing his morals to realize the will of other one is a selfish person?

Caleb Reusser

In Coarlie's shoes how do you tell anyone that what is bothering you is that your mother wants you to assassinate the princess? That isn't exactly something you can take back once you share it.

Ellake

Thanks! Fixed them.

Connor Mcharg

A great chapter as always, but Patreon formatting ate some asterisks in the skill descriptions - here’s a multiplication symbol if you want to copy it: ×

Kanyau

If there was an Embodiment of Selfishness, Coarlie would be well on her way. TYFTC!


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