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Chapter 193 - Divided Decisions

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thank you I’m glad Deverall is restored, now for Luc, Evindal and the uni gang to be safe!

Dan M

Frick's path is Goblin. He has definitely learned and developed as a result of his time with Nate: He's learned that always pushing the limits is the fastest way to grow. He's true to himself, his path and his master now. He hasn't even needed a serious scolding in a long time.

Ellake

My commentary is...you're both right. It's important to remember Frick's personality. He likes to annoy people. He knows that these kind of jokes aren't necessarily funny and he's just needling Nate. So, I expect that readers would have similar responses, either finding Frick funny or annoying. Anyway, that's my take!

Jason Hardman

Moments of levity are fine, but I just find it heavy handed currently, overstaying its welcome. As I understand it, Frick's is a spirit that can take any form. His first contract was with a goblin, so he modelled his self image after goblins. He imprinted on his master. I'm happy he's got his own personality, but I'd expect him to learn from his new experiences too, and evolve accordingly. Learn to find his moments to go full goblin, and when to tone it down for his environment and audience.

Vance Tenorio

I think Frick and his personality is a good tool to change the tone of the story, adding levity to what would otherwise be an entirely serious chapter with no deviation from that. (Also, Frick is a goblin, or a fragment of one. Grace and maturity aren't exactly the traits goblins are known for. XD)

Connor Mcharg

Minor nitpick, but: Ark - the famous boat (and a few other similar things). Arc - a trajectory, whether it’s electricity, a thrown object, or a story.

VioletSummit

I hope they eat all the mana in the city and the stupid headmaster loses it when he sees what they did to his perfect little university!

Jason Hardman

I know it's subjective, but I find Frick's constant goblin fetishistic commentary, and sexual innuendos, mostly grating rather than humorous. And that's coming from someone who tends to have a perverse sense of humour. It's just purile. I know it's a core character trait. He's really just a child like entity heavily influenced by his initial state. It's unique to have a non-standard companion character, but his jokes wear out their welcome very quickly after the first mention. He's repetitive. I thought he might evolve a bit more grace and maturity, plus a sense of timing and appropriateness, by learning from Nate.

Tim Murray

Especially when in earlier books it’s stated that the nobility wouldn’t challenge the adventurers guild because it’s too strong.

Jason Hardman

Yeah, would expect high level investigators to be sent. You'd presume they have people strong enough to shut the entire branch down if needed.

Robert Simmons

Good freaking question

Bosparan

I'd think so. But I imagine the ambitious traitor is relying on making it work by controlling the public narrative. Optimistic, if you're asking me, but greed and ambition have led many a smart person astray...

Bosparan

Thanks for the chapter!

Neppy

Tftc! Small typo here: "around static *thst* had let her" (Is there a place you prefer having typos get posted? Discord somewhere, or is here fine?)

Tim Murray

I’m really enjoying this new arc. My only question is. The Adventurers Guild is a worldwide organization that doesn’t answer to one singular government. So wouldn’t they respond with force at the destruction of one of their posts? Especially at the hands of supposedly high ranking members of said guild? *edit: spelling*


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