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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2025-07-13 23:15:33 +0000 UTC

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Pixel

'now gone, more' - I think a semi-colon would be better here. 'did feel on' - missing pronoun. (And Steve Wells' observation, too ^^)

Steve Wells

Her fingers down his shoulder to his chest. You are missing some words in this sentence.


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