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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2025-07-26 05:15:11 +0000 UTC

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Pixel

'constant, or does' - I don't think this comma is needed, but I'd need to do some checking to be sure. Too lazy to do that right now for free xD 'castle, and' - definitely no comma here, though :P 'Ash said, as' - also no comma here ^^ 'gift, and' - I'm kinda partial to a dash here, but it's totally correct as it is ^^ 'As long as he doesn’t try to bear hug me.' - missing italics 'place’s name, and' - No comma here ^^ And Selena, seriously? A twelve-pounder? Guess you might as well start big xD

Not a clever man

repeated capture and release must be very disorienting and terrifying... feel bad for the lady. Hope she is strong enough (though I imagine not everyone will be) to survive what she is going through...

Not a clever man

Glad to find out more about the elf, and happy it's not so simple... but why is WilCo acting like Alien abductors and implanting and then releasing them all 'free range' like back to Vas? Everything seems a lot more complex then before.


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