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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 25

🕑 Added 2025-07-30 01:03:48 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

Thanks man! And seriously, I really appreciate you letting me know errors/typos you spot! It’s one less that my editor will have to find and will help improve the quality of the book on launch. Seriously, thank you man!

Dual.

Haylee and selena are adorable, tftc!

Pixel

'coming from on the ramparts' - this doesn't quite work as a sentence and I can't tell if it's just me 'beside him purring' - should have a comma before 'purring' ^^ 'draw swords, readied arrows, and prepared spells' - shifting tense. Should either be 'drawn swords, readied arrows, and prepared spells' or 'draw swords, ready arrows, and prepare spells' 'Ash completely forgotten by them' - 'by them' is kinda superfluous here and can be left out if you want ^^ 'aimed at the Bolt' - the 'at' shouldn't be there ^^ I loved this 'battle' ^^ It's nice seeing all that training and preparing paying off ^^ Btw., tell me if I get over-zealous with my proofing or any aspect of it ^^


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