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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2025-08-07 05:05:22 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

Thanks, man!

Pixel

'Ash sat on the fallen tree' - what fallen tree? I went back to the last chapter with Ash and couldn't find a mention of a fallen tree - I think 'a fallen tree' would be much better here 'judging the evening sun on how late it was' - I think this is supposed to be the other way around or is this a phrasing I just haven't come across before? 'a book, and' - no comma here 'So we’re walking over a mass grave.' - I think this is supposed to be in italics

Posiden 300

I cant wait for them to return and inflict the pain 10 fold.


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