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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 33

🕑 Added 2025-08-11 01:07:35 +0000 UTC

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Pixel

'Rachel chewed her mouth full of chocolate and' - should either have a 'with' or commas after 'Rachel' and 'chocolate' 'cauterize the bleeding.' - I think it should either be 'cauterize the wound' or 'stop the bleeding', but I haven't checked If I keep repeating how good this is, I'm gonna sound like a broken record :P

Posiden 300

Some sort of human elemental hybrid? Rachel need to be protected and i hope the other girls cling to her immediately without any jealousy.


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