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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2025-08-11 01:10:34 +0000 UTC

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'cauterize the bleeding' - same as last chapter, still haven't checked 'where he had been cut' - typo, 'she had been cut' or 'he had been cutting' 'Ash lifted her chin and turned to face him.' - missing a pronoun or something in the second part, unless he turns to face himself, which might be a bit too Lovecraftian for this story :P 'to break away the kiss' - 'break away from' or 'break the' here ^^

Dual.

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