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Feral Mage Book 3: Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2025-08-13 18:57:35 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

Thank, man! Got them fixed!

Chase Kilgore

Got it fixed! Thanks, man!

Chase Kilgore

Thank you man, I cut the first sentence!

Pixel

'and are going to pawn it off' - I'd suggest either 'are going to pawn off' or 'you are going to pawn it off' 'Every event for nobility in Witchbrook, she would attend with Baroness Julia' - I'd flip these for a more natural sounding sentence 'them spot Isabelle' - typo, should be 'spotted' 'grabbed hold of the edge of his jacket, holding it' - I'd drop the first 'hold' here to avoid repetition

Posiden 300

One Feral Mage chapter and two De'Vas chapters. I feel spoiled.

Adam

“He hoped this would detour her.” I think it should be “deter.”

Steve Wells

Red Isabelle, a notorious gang boss from the slums of Witchbrook known as The Rim. Bryce still had no idea why she was so interested in him, but Isabelle seemed to take any opportunity she could to be by him. The first sentence is an unnecessary reminder.. As this is book 3, no one should be starting the series with this book. I don't have a replacement suggestion, sorry.

DJ Johnson

Yes please!

Chase Kilgore

De’Vas Book 4 is getting close. Im honestly hoping to wrap it up by the end of next week.

Chase Kilgore

Just one chapter today to start off Book 3, I'll try to have more this weekend. I should also have two more De'Vas posted tonight.

DJ Johnson

Whoa dropping thus before finishing de vas? What a pleasant surprise.


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