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Feral Mage Book 3: Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2025-09-02 19:32:16 +0000 UTC

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Pixel

'the setup dominoes' - I think 'setup' might need to be in two words here, but haven't checked 'once you return' - wrong tense. should be 'returned' 'It has always' - wrong tense, 'had' 'Red Lace' - not sure this should be in italics. That's generally only book titles (and possibly ships, but can't remember), except the Bible 'Isabelle smiled when he mentioned the contract' - she's already smiling, so this feels a little odd, but I also can't think of a better solution that fits the following part.... Just something to chew on, I guess 'dimmed at the puppets' - feels like it should be something like 'at the mention of' or something, but I don't have a great suggestion 'one to Witchbrook?' - I don't think this is actually a question. It really just seems like a statement, so no question mark (and remember the 'Callie asked' following it)

DJ Johnson

Im also wondering who's thr love interest focus this book. Still betting on cat girls.


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