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Feral Mage 3: Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2025-11-04 17:52:15 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

I think this chapter might be tweaked some, hindsight I feel the tone is a little off for the story

Pixel

'nodded in understanding her plan' - this feels off. Should probably be 'of her plan' 'Vex excitedly raced along while Bellamy followed at a more leisurely pace.' - this is a repetition in the paragraph

Posiden 300

Vex once again being the gem of the girls. Good Bryce lol


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