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Feral Mage 3: Chapter 31

🕑 Added 2025-11-04 17:55:06 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

Sorry man, I forgot to italicize after copying from original. Good catch and thank you again for doing this! I’m unsure whose more direct in the story, Callie or Vex

Pixel

'this area since times like these, rioting wouldn’t be uncommon' - missing an 'in' in there 'So they are the knight and the fencer who were guarding nobles' - either missing italics for thoughts, or wrong tense 'then turn to' - wrong tense 'mention kill that thing' - either wrong inflection or the man's got some accent I can't place 'You didn’t ask. I didn’t give. Ciarra chose you.' - this feels like it should be in italics 'They probably think I’m a corpse floating in the harbor right now…' - missing italics 'He did.' - why is this in italics? This is a fun side of Callie to see ^^ She definitely knows what she wants xD

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Stress relief


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