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Hey Teacher
🕑 Added 2023-09-07 18:53:16 +0000 UTC(Edit: Took the censorship out cause I relized the joke works better without it. Also did some more edits on page 4)
They're talking about bands.
You see, the kids didn't know teachers live out of school. I mean, they know but they hadn't seen it before I think.
See, I mentioned that Lil's parents own a music store/school, and that Davo works there when not with the band, and Tina is a teacher and of course she went to see a band named warlock Rage in here. Well, it's all coming together.
Here's the third, yet second, comic of this new series of comics I've been doing. I'm still trying to nail a style that's fun yet easier enough for me to make these quick. You can see here that the backgrounds are looser, I was trying to go for something UPA-ish.
So this is how Davo met Tina, the day she wanted to buy a new guitar for her brother.
I think this may be the first time I show how my OCs get together.
Well, I've had a script for this comic for actual years now. Like one year, but still. I hadn't been able to actually do it cause the truth is that the original dialogue was way way longer, the first time I tried sketching it it ended up with like ten pages lol.
But I finally came up with a way to abridged it.
I wanna use some of that old script for a quick follow up, I already have an idea but first I want to give Tony a win. (Spoiler?). There's another quick comic I will be finishing soon that explains their dynamic.
A thing that really excites me about this comic is that I actually got to make a contextual use of Davo's design. See, it may not show but Davo's design may be the one I put more thought into. Like he wants to look like a tough guy but he's literally a cute white bunny with a pink nose. His face is a square (strong) surrounding a round snout (soft). And especially here, his ears go up with his emotions. He gets excited and up they go. They betray him in that sense.
In the case of Tina, her design I came up with by accident, I really liked the idea of a deer with glasses lol.
Also, about the kids. I got to draw them again! I had mentioned before but they may be some of my oldest OCs, ironically. Also a bit more of canon, Davo's swear Jar is not the only one they have in the store, Lil's dad started that tradition.
Comments
Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez
I originally added the censorship because I've always found it visually funny, but at least here it totally works better without it. And actually can't believe I didn't add the last page thing originally, that was part of the original idea, but I guess I forgot. It actually surprised me while checking the comic for these edits lol
Morlund
Hehe, the comic is indeed even better with the uncensored swearing, including the edited last page with the bear kid now demonstrating what he learned from Davo! XD
Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez
Damn, I actually didn't thought about that lol, I guess she's one of those cool teacher that goes with their first name
Morlund
Wonderful to finally see this adorable comic of how this adorable pairing got started! Aside from the always delightful characters, the background of the store looks really nice and is a good style for this kind of comic.^^ The kids must be surprised to see both of their teachers getting together...and the fact that he calls her 'Miss Tina' only highlights the fact that she seems to still not have a last name. X3
nerocatto
Love how Davo's ears perk up whenever he's excited. A very cute detail!
Ssemodnar sgod
I love this so much lol ^^! These kind of comic strips are great, man! Love to see the band in action xd!
