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🕑 Added 2024-07-23 19:11:03 +0000 UTCOr.
I don't even like this one lol.
I mentioned in my last month post that that piece was something of a second attempt on a concept for an old piece I had done before, and that would be this one.
It actually might be one of, if not the very first piece featuring Davo and Tina ever.
I had some fun while making it but I do feel it's a little weak, but I still feel is worth posting. For fun let's do a sort of autopsy of it, as a bit.
I'd say my problem with it is that it kind of feels too much like a “my first DeviantArt ship fan art” piece to me, if that makes sense.
I mean kind of generic, it's only missing the flowers and the angel wings.
Not that there's something wrong with that of course, just not my thing.
See, I clearly started strong with the sharing headphones and the music concept. And Davo's trademark sitting upside down move gives it a little flavor, but after that, I remember clearly not being sure what to do next.
The bench I chose randomly to keep it interesting and then the park logically followed. After that I just kept throwing stuff to see what stuck to add texture, like the elaborated lighting. I almost made it work when I added the basketball court but that wasn't enough I feel.
There's also 2 versions, one with Davo smiling that works better visually and one where he doesn't and works better character wise.
See, the idea behind that back then was Davo being a huge tsundere. I still think he's a tsundere but now I don't think he's such a tryhard as back then.
Still a bit tho. Lol
I don't really hate this piece. It's far from being my worst work. (You guys will never see those) I just find it really frustrating because it's actually so close to being good in my eyes. So much that I actually still felt it was worth posting.
Though that's just my opinion. What do you think?
Comments
Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez
Tsundere Davo, It just works lol. And yeah, I think one of the problems with the shadows is that they're too sharp, Itd help for them to be softened.
Morlund
Awww, how sweet! Just as sweet as the last pic of them sharing headphones, in fact. <3 Even though the artstyle is recognizably older their larger-headed more toony look is adorable in its own right and the background in beautiful as always.^^ The only thing that I think looks off is the tree leaves shadows, though something like that is probably hard to get exactly right. And I strangely like tsundere-Davo XD
Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez
Yeah maybe I'm overthinking it. An Oh yeah, you're right I posted a WIp, Had forgotten about it
Ssemodnar sgod
Holy sheesh! I remember seeing the WIP for this on a post of yours in DA back in 2022!! Good thing that we finally see it finished lol ^^. And don't be so hard on yourself, it holds up pretty good xd
