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Early Access Servings 1-5 and Upcoming Rewards

🕑 Added 2017-11-11 04:20:36 +0000 UTC

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McPerson

Wow, really? I personally feel that her look in CAATS caught her a look a bit better, since while she is attractive, she's nerdy and 'less glamorous' than Lalia. I thought the nose and such emphasised that quite well. Arthur's views on her design may have changed in the long interim. I kinda feel its a bit drastic, but you'd better see how everyone else feels.

AdjectiveNounCombo

So this is a point I've wanted to clarify for some time. I really didn't capture Jane well in CAATS. I tried to focus on Jane's key features then which were her hair, glasses, and triangle-shaped nose. I didn't, however try to emphasize her attractiveness, though, which Arthur brought to my attention. So, I decided that, in addition to redesigning the key characters, I'd focus more on beautifying Jane. I pitched the idea to Arthur to redesign the characters and, after some talks, we whipped up a few sketches, one of which was of Jane with a haircut and a trimmed frame. So, I focused on keeping Jane's nose trimmer and giving her thicker eyelashes. Basically, same laws apply to Lalia in terms of how cute she's drawn, but she lacks the cartoonish look. I hope the look isn't too drastic, but I felt I owed Jane a serious redemption after bastardizing her look throughout CAATS.

McPerson

So I guess we’re getting some BBW Lalia after all. After having her default on ‘smug and hungry’ for so long, it’s refreshing to see a little more of her vulnerabilities in your take. The bit at the clothes shop is a major highlight. Not even Kim seemed to upset her this much. My only nitpick so far is Jane. Maybe it’s the new haircut, but something seems off about her design here. I actually couldn’t recognise her at first. I remember you gave her a little more of a distinctive nose before, and you seem to be downplaying that now.