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Lewd Ruby Manga Page (One Off)
🕑 Added 2022-07-26 00:01:31 +0000 UTCSo, you all wanted more Ruby lewds so I have come to deliver~
I am testing how to properly do manga page compositions. I hope this came out alright. I would like some feedback if possible ^^;
Thanks everyone, enjoy the lewd <3
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Love the idea of doing manga pages. It flows well from panel to panel and the sfx are on point. It is fun that in panel 1 we are looking at her backside and in panel 3 it is more her front side. Though the change in background from panel 1 to panel 3 comes across a bit odd. Going from the grey to the solid black While I know Ruby is one person, it is hard to tell if the text boxes are of one of her mouths voicing those lines (and if so, which mouth says it) or if she is thinking those lines.
