Daniel Greene
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First Draft of Snow Drift is DONE!
🕑 Added 2019-10-04 21:40:42 +0000 UTCI need to go over it this weekend, but after completely restarting several times, I think I am okay with that I have now.
It made me learn I HATE to write action, so I certainly need to get better at it to fix that problem. Writing action makes me feel like some kind of tool who is obsessed with his characters being badass. UGH!
But while this one might not be as well done as my first, I am doing this to be criticized and learn. It sure will be neat to be on the other end of a review for this one :)
Comments
MithrilDM
We readers like when a hero overcomes getting hurt or struggling in combat. That's how you make a badass seem badass without making it seem like you're making them too badass!
Alex C
Can’t wait to read it!
