Daniel Greene
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RETALIATION
🕑 Added 2020-02-08 19:50:33 +0000 UTCHere is the third short story. I linked to the google doc with a view-only link due to patreon not being the most pleasant to read on. ( https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kP_TCrJ0Nq77HzvYqHhCLu-mBg6VogOpb6BkwJPBiqU/edit?usp=sharing )
Of course, any and all feedback is greatly appreciated.
I did end up censoring the story a bit. The introduction to this world was just shaping up to be darker than I initially wanted it to be.
I think the end result is still just as effective. A look into the mind of someone whose entire way of life has been destroyed.
