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Cyoa Scene 2 + Next Scene Suggestions
🕑 Added 2023-09-06 20:27:53 +0000 UTCKeeping this one short coz I don't want the animation to bee 10 minutes of setup and then just one minute of something actualy happening. That being said, We are about a minute in and I don't know where this is going, so Instead of making another poll right away, I will take your suggestions and then put them in the next poll.
Please suggest things that could be done with 30-50 seconds of animation. Something like "She goes to watch TV" or "And then the fire nation attacks" is fine, and something like "Amber goes to the shopping mall" is also fine since I can do that with a scene transition, but "Amber falls in love with a neighbour called Steve, they spend a romantic day at the beach, get married, have 3 kids and live happily ever after" is not possible.
Also please try to avoid things that are too vague, like "She gets laid".
Leave your suggestions in the comments please.
Comments
David Fenger
Next exercise with the weights is some sort of twisting exercise that leaves her all coiled up.
erohato
She puts the weight down and lies down on the couch to rest. The shelf above the couch (the shadow is slightly visible in this scene 2) starts shaking suspiciously. If it fits in the next scene too, then the shelf comes loose from the wall and whatever was on it falls and flattens the girl.
Beadey
After getting tired she could go to put the weight back but accidentally knock the rest off the rack causing them to roll toward her and flatten the areas of her they roll across.
ElongatedStretch
I just imagine her arm giving out and being force stretched down by the weight and unable to move or retract her elongated arm from the floor leaving her flustered.
