House Sitting - Pg. 18 (Starcross Ch. 5)
🕑 Added 2025-02-01 01:37:27 +0000 UTCSarah has a peaceful morning while Ash gets a bit of a rude awakening on his second day inside her belly!
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Bruh Bruheimer
I feel like at this point she could dogest him soon
Starcross
Just wanted to say I love reading your analysis of these pages! <3 I try not to get too bogged down in story details during the writing process, but it always makes me happy when I see someone comment on one or more of the implications or deeper ideas that I *did* want to convey in the story, even if just subtly. Makes me feel like I’m doing *something* right. :)
Reve Steven
Star may need to take a rope to help him. Similar to the watermelon.
PrivateXimmy
It’s been established in chapter 4 that occupants in her stomach don’t need to eat, nor does she. Seems like she still has to drink though. Granted, she doesn’t have the pendant on her, these are just the latent traits.
Pokemonboy101
Now star will have to probably have to swallow some food so Ash can eat something since he's currently in Stars stomach which is keeping her full Ash will need will need something to eat so that way he won't starve to death while in her stomach.
loyd
I wonder if she will try to swallow her girlfriend instead of sitting on her
loyd
I wonder if she will realize that she can throw him up
PrivateXimmy
Also, god that fourth panel is so good. While I personally do love fat fetish stuff, I *adore* the juxtaposition here in a wholly different way. Her naturally thin profile complimenting the massive bulge hanging down in front of her offers such an *electric* view of her frame. Like it dominates her figure so fully that it feels like this tiny warden is sort of “cradling” her occupant. Really goes a long way to highlight the dynamic she has going on right now wish ash. She may be tiny, but as long as she’s got him in there? He’s *hers.* The faint look at the bottom where he is, with her positioned above in frames 5 and 6 also adorably highlight this.
PrivateXimmy
Also, her pride in the final panel is just adorable.
PrivateXimmy
Interesting how natural this is all coming to her. Almost makes you wonder if this is closer to what the *actual* desire she had was that the pendant responded to. After all, at the time, she *was* stressing about not being close enough with her girlfriend anymore. Maybe a (mostly) permanent passenger would be the endgame of that desire? Idk I’m just speculating. Either way, she’s got the perfect little subject to bounce personal ideas and thoughts off of privately, I’m sure Ash can keep a secret. ;) A lot of folks earlier were complimenting the belly on the first page (it’s a solid set liner for day 2), but god I really love all the ones after it. The gentle “hang” of ash in her stomach makes such a defined outline, and seeing it faintly bulge when he moves around is so damn intimate. The faint noise accompanying her movements really add to that feeling of our bottom boys ever present gastronomic bloat resting in her. It’s just *really* great. Like you compare how it looks now compared to the “balloon bulge” from chapters 1-2, and it’s just night and day how much you’ve improved over time. Keep up the good work!
lofis
Soda, hot coffee, pizza, cake, candy... anything is possible.
PrivateXimmy
Oh my god, she can intentionally tease him with cold and hot water: this could get lowkey saucy
Starcross
So round it breaks the 4th wall! ;)
pl0nt
that belly in the first panel mwah chefs kiss ❤️
jiri frazier
He didn't even feel it coming
ArtTheGreat
Even if star doesn’t let him exit that way I wonder if he’ll stick his arm up and poke his hand out?
DrBeerMaker
Oh damn, that really, really hot.... or cold ! 🤣
lofis
Now Ash is in the crossfire to anything Sarah swallows.
Minty Cecily
Now that’s how I wanna start every morning. Now the question is, which position, Sarah or Ash? Answer: yes
Britney
It was a thought
Furtherbean
Don't think that happens in this comic.
Starcross
Hell of a way to start your day. :P
Britney
Loved it, the reaction was hilarious. I’m so curious what will happen now that he’s in the stomach. I wonder if he’ll get absorbed?
ImKike19
Poor Ash haha xD