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Should I rework the beginning?

🕑 Added 2023-07-22 01:15:34 +0000 UTC

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Lupine69

I think it works perfectly fine considering introductions should be concise! It’s important to remember that more of the story will unfold once you choose who you want to find out more about.

Kenj91

Focus working on day 2 interaction. Day 1 is fine in it's own right.


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