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Left Behind Again

🕑 Added 2021-12-21 09:50:57 +0000 UTC

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CW Moss

I absolutely love this genre in erotic stories. The theme when a smaller normal woman has a romantic (sexual) relationship with a guy and starts to change, growing stronger, taller, smarter, super powers and all other woowoo stuff. At first it's wonderful for the guy but he slowly starts to become more worried about things until she eventually looks at him as a lessor being and things start to get dark. "The Monolith" was also a fantastic story. One of my all time favorites. Thanks so much for continuing to write stories in this direction. I hope that you will consider more like this. Thanks again CW

Legfan71

I have to say I was surprised by the conclusion. After not only being betrayed by her husband and best friend, but also repeatedly embarrassed and cast aside, it was a surprise to see Jane not exact some sort of revenge against Kate. I guess the sheer beauty of Kate overwhelmed her need for retribution.

HikerAngel

Thank you so much! I was actually unsure of how people would respond to it, since it veers off into a bit of a different direction than the first, but I very much appreciate this thorough comment!!!

Legfan71

Wow, so much to discuss. First of all, thank you for taking the time to write this much anticipated sequel. I’m sure it had to be a daunting task to take on. So many suggestions, so many different directions you could have taken with this story. I’m sure no matter what, some people will not be happy with it no matter what as everyone had their own vision of what could or should happen in the sequel. My initial thought is that it is very well-written, highly erotic and it has a satisfying, and justified conclusion. I’ll hold off adding anything else until after I’ve read it a few more times, but thanks again for creating this.


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