skarpleassure
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which is better?
🕑 Added 2024-09-14 12:51:50 +0000 UTC
Hey guys, lately I've been thinking about the way I'm making the tournament comic, and I'd like to know what you think.
What kind of page do you prefer?
A: A page with more panels, dialog, narration and smaller scenes.
B: Pages with just one main illustration and little dialog between the girls.
I'm in doubt because option A is much better for storytelling, as I can add more information to each scene and work with a more complete script for the fight in each chapter.
And option B is totally focused on illustrating a few key scenes during the fight, and is much easier to think about and do, since I don't have to worry so much about “continuity” of the scene.
Your opinion is very important to me, so as well as voting, feel free to comment on what you think.
Comments
TheGreatWiseAss
I don't mind either way, I like the artwork more than the text
Saru
I feel like a mixture of both is always nice. Feel like all your drawings is making good use of both!
Garytheanimal
Personally, I love the dialogue as much as the art
NarutoPASS5
But I'll read either way
NarutoPASS5
I like the way the stories are currently drawn. Thr art is always great but it's also thr dialogue and flow of events that sell the hot fights
Thad
It's hard for me to say because I enjoy storytelling and continuity in a fight, but if you feel focusing more on the key moments and not worrying about the continuity as much plays more into your style then maybe you should do that... 🤔 Either way, I enjoy your work. 😅
