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Corner Saga #002 - Bash
🕑 Added 2023-06-25 14:56:51 +0000 UTCMore panels full of dialogue lol. I think that may be one of the things I need to improve in these longer comics: show more instead of saying more. But people might not understand what I am trying to show so I will have to find a proper balance between the two.
The last comic's full-color version is up on the same post. I changed some dialogue so the flow is not too awkward. There is the luxury of adding/editing images on Patreon so that is always good if I have to make minor changes like that. I am unsure about the backgrounds though; I might change them again before the final post in the future.
Thanks to SlimyDan for the input on the plot. I don't know why I kept thinking I had to include Wailmos in the whole story lol, definitely an improvement to have him take a separate route for a moment.
Again, if anyone has any suggestions, feel free to say something in the comments!
