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Rehearsal progress!

🕑 Added 2022-04-26 17:38:56 +0000 UTC

Comments

AceTrilby

I'd like to echo what others have been saying about maybe getting a bit too close to the "action" to really give it a sense of scale, but I'd like to also add that some of the dialogue has been a little hard to follow. It's my understanding English isn't your first language, so it might be worth getting another person to look over your text just to iron out any quirks of the lingo. Other than that, keep up the great work! It's been great to see your style evolve since I first became a patron and I genuinely think you're improving all the time :)

UsernameRedacted

I feel that sometimes many of the characters are really close like to see the characters in there entire huge glory. besides that everything is cool the only thing I could think is maybe a character bio page when new characters or even locations are introduce. But I'm enjoying this very much can't wait to see more.

Boojaja

I can appreciate the bellies being so big they fill up the frame but some more zoomed out shots would be nice too. It's easier to get a sense of how huge the girls are when you can see more of the rest of their bodies. Other than that, I'm really enjoying your work so far. Real top notch stuff!

Brosepherous

Really love Belly Bumping, so keep up the great work!

UnderABigRock

I like how it’s going. I do think sometimes there are more blank areas than anything, or the view being to close to be able to see anything. Other than those, I really like the style. The line work is great and character design is 👌✨