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60 Blood Arts

🕑 Added 2017-10-11 22:06:30 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Yeah, i agree it sounds better.

Fuck what a good epic battle, but you really are an evil man leaving it like that. I need more, so i guess you are doing it right

Chrome

My telekinetic augments dug into the ground like cleats, let me gain the traction I needed for maximum force. (should be letting instead of let) Using the momentum of the fall, I planted me left foot into the ground. (should be my instead of me) She then lifter her head from my knees. (should be lifted instead of lifter) My meal armor bent, but it did not split open. (not sure what this should be but meal doesn't seem right) I flaw up and backwards, off the ground once the full brunt of her blow landed onto me. (should be flew instead of flaw) I snapped a vicious, short kick straight into inner thigh. (into who's inner thigh?) Thanks for the chapter!

Monsoon117

I changed the name of Kessiah’s skill to Blood Arts. It fits the theme of the skill better.


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