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63 The Makings of a Class

🕑 Added 2017-10-16 01:30:17 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

Thanks for the help!

Umut Numanoglu

Thanks for the chapter, I found some **possible** mistakes: moving and arm -> an arm They called harpoon cannons equalizers. -> They are called harpoon cannon .. he trigger -> the trigger had it one hand -> had it on hand (?)

Monsoon117

You are completely right. I mis-remembered that, so I will go back and change it. Thank you very, very much for pointing this out. A small inconsistency like this can have severe consequences in the long run.

Patrick Ralston

Back when Boundless storm was unlocked it said that it used 3 Unique skills, Dreadnought Brute, Savage Berserker, and Tranquil Duelist. Also, in chapter 54 Torix refers to Mythical skills requiring a total of 15 skills to create. So when it is mentioned here that mythical skills require 5 unique skills, did you decide to just change it, or something else.

Good stuff, relaxing SOL things can be really good as a pause of just monster after monster

13lack12ose

The romantic interlude is a good idea. Daniel endlessly crunching through monsters can become stale after a while. It also gives you a chance to test out a different style of writing and all the nuances associated with the change

Monsoon117

Naw, it's the same.

So... what does a class consist of? Is it actually different from a legendary skill?

Monsoon117

I would argue that Daniel has a bit more to him as far as attraction is concerned than just physical beauty. He's thought Althea was attractive for a long time, but he still hasn't went for her romantically.

Efflorescence

Well I guess we know who the romantic interest is now.

Monsoon117

I intend to add it as the story progresses. Gotta set up the plot so it isn't forced though.

JoeyB

I'm still really interested in seeing daniel interact with humans and seeing their reaction to learning that he is an earth human like them.

MAJmuffin

thanks for the chapter mate

not quite like mana or moving and arm *should be an instead of and. Thanks for the chapter.

Chrome

It would feel more natural that way as well (missing period) on removing he trigger. (should be the) I pulled him towards one the guys jetpacking away (I think an of goes between one and the) Thanks for the chapter!

Tyler Babcock

The change in pace with the whole lunch date thing is very relaxing. Nice to a (hopefully not too long) break from the fighting for some more slice of life things. With how Althea's character is turning out, this is something Daniel will have to do from time to time for him to keep his transforming monster harpoon sniper lady from quitting on him.

This is getting good :D, Thanks my good sir!

Monsoon117

No problem Sir Sloth. Glad you enjoyed it.

Sir Sloth

Thanks for the long chapter!

Monsoon117

I'm going to be trying some new stuff out. Let me know what you guys think about the next few chaps and I'll adjust accordingly. So far, the response has been positive. If I continue executing well, it should work out well and give the story a new, refreshing angle to see the characters from. Also, this chapter was really long and really fun to write. Hope you guys enjoy it.


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