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Monsoon117

It's a mistake I made. Royal Road allows me to go through and retune all the past documents at once, and I fixed that mistake on that platform. I'd need to spend a day or two reading over each chapter to fix it elswhere, and it simply wasn't worth doing on my patreon. Know they are supposed to be called remnants, and it was an oversight on my part.

lionheart

how come they are called revenants now??? before it was remnants

alexander julian

I'm waiting for the melt ground gravity enemy into it, solidify ground, augment it using the hybrids augment surface technique

alexander julian

Is it just me or is Althea's build much better suited fir a bow. Not sure what rifle skills she has but she has all the kinda roguish ranged characters stuff coz of the rifle and her original build. Which drastically changes when she goes into melee as a super strong shape shifting horror that comes back from the dead. I think the bow would much better suit the abites she's got over the story. She could fire a bow reliant on her absurd strength rather than Daniels ability to manufacture a firing mechanism. (perhaps made out of a famously flexible and tough dimensional fabric?) it would also allow her to make better use of her shapeshifting abilities like acid and such as she can apply them to trick arrows rather than having to throw them in between firing bolts. Finally if she needs to she can still have the rifle as a side arm on case she needs to fire while flying or something like that. In addition the bow becomes a more effective weapon in melee than just stabbing with her bayonet

So im not doubting that shes the one behind this as it does make sense, however i like how no one (readers) even question if what the monster said is true. Its claiming that someone in high position with schema, trusted by overseers is causing this. Does she have the resources for this? Yes. Does she have a motive? Unknown but probable. Could it be anyone else? Yes. It could literally be someone on the other side of the universe thats causing this. Tohtella is likely to be the person responsible for this but it could just be setting her up. All foreshadowing has built her up to be the one causing this however nothing she's done has ever directly pointed to her leading this from what i recall.

Shannon Smith

Someone called it a chapter or two ago. It makes sense, though. I can't imagine one of Schema's agents would be nearly as inept as she was. She was just using it as a smokescreen to help her stay hidden.

Grevis165

The only way to do something right is to do it yourself, Tohtella isn't gonna wait for others to clear the worlds for her.

Demonuss

Though I never foresaw the Revenant being so heavily involved that was quite the surprise.

Demonuss

I knew she needed to die but to have it confirmed from the monster itself is quite satisfying, their was no way her lack of action could have been explained by anything else. Now hopefully Daniel and Co manage to rip that bitch limb from limb before she can make a convenient escape or some other bullshit.

Jacob Santos

Two chapters in 2 days! Will we get 3 chapters in a row?

Some BS Deity

Ha, I thought something was fishy with her.

s476

Thanks!

GreyMalken

Schema recovery agent on Geiss

Zachary Smith

Tohtella sounds familiar. Who was this?

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Alex R

Who did you think it would be?

Asurathe13th

I KNEW IT!!!

Tyler Babcock

Good work with the plot twist at the end. While it comes to some as obvious, so too was there many other 'obvious' villains behind the scenes. Great job for those who got it right, and haha to those who got it wrong. (I got it wrong)

Omega

Thanks

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Jacob Santos

Anything not completely predictable is good to me.

Jacob Santos

It is good to be wrong. I had thought Lehesion would be a big bad but it comes back to the Revenant. Hmmm. One other prediction I have is that she is going to pin as much of the events and blame on the team. Likewise, she has every reason to choke them on their filth.

Monsoon117

Ah man, I hope this chapter explains some stuff in a very satisfying manner. Let me know if you guys are super satisfied. It's a pretty short chapter as well, but let me know if it's satisfying nonetheless.

crusty pickle

he has been dethroned

crusty pickle

first


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