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203 Into Oblivion

🕑 Added 2019-03-01 01:11:50 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

I hope someone messages Torix when they are done with all this, just to check in on him. Would be a pain to find out he had something bad happen to him on his home planet while no one was looking.

I'm loving this arc more and more. I guess there will be any malus for Torix death but I wonder what they will be. By the way: "Chrona stared at me than the pit of lavender slush." => "Chrona stared at me then the pit of lavender slush."

Some BS Deity

Truth.

Monsoon117

I'll have to look up the definition and get a better understanding of the differences. You're suggestion is a correction to something I already corrected.

So I may have read this part wrong but I believe you want centrifugal force. Centripetal force is the force pulling toward the center of the spin while centrifugal is the outward.

s476

last 3 chapters were perfect ! I would ask if its the last highlight of the arc, like the yawn fight, but there is still quite a bit left on the planet left to do. thanks for the chapter!

Vin Reisling

Just a thought, does tohtella adair have an old one parasite on her that makes her do dumb shit? Because we already know one old one who wants living metal, could be his servant

I'm betting he's going to get that next chapter there is no freaking way he doesn't get some big juicy reward for taking down a hybrid that was stronger than freaking Yawim. (I think i spelled that wrong) At least level wise, yes the team has grown massively but the huge level gap should still be given thought when giving them rewards.

Atlas Dwarf

Thanks for the chapter. Well if he's capped and she is over level 18,000...at least one juicy reward is waiting. Although surprised Schema didn't hand out a quest/bounty after he analyzed the Hybrid or Emagrotha, like Schema did to Daniel with the Levelers. Welp now there's just the a psycho god, an organization of galactic threat level, and the Empire to deal with. Easy.

Demonuss

That is an interesting theory and one I would like to see happen, but I don't think Daniel has near enough experience with the cipher to pull off something like this nor will he for the foreseeable future. It just gives time for someone to come along and restart this whole hybrid nonsense as her current state is...well dangerous is a understatement.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Don't know why no-one even considers the dimensional cipher to help her. Even if he can't fix her body he might be able to transfer her to a new body even if it isn't gialgathen. The possibilities are literally infinite.

thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

He doesn't have a class and his level is capped. Otherwise he'd be outleveling her pretty easily. He'll be getting bonuses for what he's doing later though. I've got plans in the works.

James Witt-Larsen

How did she out level him. Didn't he land the killing blow on the hybrid?

Monsoon117

Ah, I could add something like that. Something along the lines of, "For a brute, you fight well." or something.

Monsoon117

thanks and fixed.

Nicholas F

"If you feel have as bad as you look, have should be half

Tyler Babcock

Is there anything else that can be said that fits in Emagrotha's history as a leader, or as a frogdragon in general other then goodbye. Anything that one of his followers would say at the end of a fight to honor the well fought defeated? (even if the fight he would refer to wasn't well fought) Not something that really needs to change, just thought of it as I read it.

Monsoon117

Ah, ok, I think I remember the instance you're talking about. I forgot to resolve it in this chapter. I meant for the mana to dissapate when he was incapacitated by the sound waves.

Synben28

Thanks for the chapter, though there is one edit I would suggest. I believe in the previous chapter, Daniel prepared for the hybrid's regeneration by charging a singularity in its chest. But there is no mention of that when the battle starts in this chapter. I'm guessing that the sonic attack broke his concentration and caused the singularity to dissipate. But I would suggest adding a quick sentence making that more explicit so that it doesn't feel like an inconsistency.

Connor Alexander

Awesome series of chapter, a very intense fight with a force that would’ve consumed many others if not for the unique makeup of this team. Good god is Lehesion an absolute mess who made who completely ruined a strong rival of his in such a petty way... I can’t wait to see what becomes of this! Thank you for these chapters!

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

Let's just say it may or may not help in other ways.

Monsoon117

Ah, thanks for the fix.

Evanescence229

Loved the chapter, only comment is that centrifugal is the wrong term, the correct one is centripetal, the force built up by circular motion.

Thanks! I liked it. Too bad Daniel can't bank all of this experience

EitherWay

Noice

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. It was a pretty long chapter too, like most of the releases this month. I'll be sticking to shorter formats for my releases simply because they suit my writing style better. Either way, hope you guys enjoy the read and had a great February.

Third again

crusty pickle

second*

Jess Koch

First


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