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207 Help Me Help You

🕑 Added 2019-03-22 22:51:24 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

Adore this story man. Everytime I see a new chapter pop up it makes my day

Michael Nistler

Why do I suddenly want to see him turn himself into a miniature sun temperature wise with his forger skill? Become so hot you turn the lava into a gaseous state...

Some BS Deity

Love the story. Can't wait for the spectacle Daniel is going to produce :)

A bit late on the train, but I concur with the others. Out of all the novels/stories that I've read, yours is the only one I've decided to support with Patreon and if there's ever a need for more (working towards a new editor/making ends meet/etc) I'm sure most of us would be willing to up a lil bit just to help make it a little easier on you. Thanks for the stories and I hope it only gets better from here!

Monsoon117

So money isn't a problem at the moment. I live very frugally, and most of the things I desire are immaterial in nature. If anything, I would trade any wealth I could gain for better writing skills or greater discipline/willpower. This comment helped motivate me today though, and hopefully I'll be able to string enough motivation days together that it becomes discipline instead.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Scott Frederiksen

I couldn't agree more. Though I would like to see Amara and how I am patient and don't want too much decision from Danny boy 😋 I do have to say, that this I follow and and support numerous webnovels but this is by far one of my top 5 (out of about 20) and is literally probably one of the two most well written and thought out. I eagerly await each chapter. Thank you for your work!

Monsoon117

My bad and fixed.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

ParoxysmDK

Thanks for the chapter. Monsoon i thought you'd like to know that out of several stories i've followed, and donated to on patreon; Yours is the only one i still support. And the reason for that is, your story is simply amazing. it is so well written, creatively thought out, and i find myself always looking forward to the next chapter and where you take it. And i can honestly see how you're improving in your writing capabilities. Also the way you write the action sequences is top tier. I think that your story is so good that it could easily be made into an anime/tv series. One thing i would like to add though: I would love to see some 'interlude' chapters and different POV'S. It's very nice for fleshing out characters, and i kind of miss Hod and amara :P

Calleman20

Moonson I was just wondering if you needed more help in the form of money from us patreons, becouse your realese schedule seems a bit sporadic, it might be that it takes that long to write, and if that's the case I apalogize for bringing this up, it's just that if you need more money for something I'm sure your loyal fans me included would love to help, I can't donate a lot but I could probably dubble my donation to 10 dollars if you need it, but this is only if your having problems or something of not I apologize, I love your story and hope to see more in the future, have a nice day yay.

Alex R

Hopefully Amara hasn't killed Hod yet.

Michael

I wonder how Hod and Amara are going back on Earth.

Erich Hansson

Thanks for the chappie

Domini

Great chap, thanks.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Corwin Amber

'That's what I wondering' not a sentence :) needs to be fixed

Atlas Dwarf

Well it either means they have a high enough Perception that Daniel can't analyze them or they have something that can block Schema's analysis. Not sure how they would be able to get his level though without getting his description (unless Schema is hiding it like Yawm now).

Atlas Dwarf

Thanks for the chapter. And have a feeling those Breakers will run into Lehesion while trying to hunt Tohtella down.

Gabriel

I've been enjoying these chapters.

"After this, neither of them would be resting as much rest as before." I believe you meant "needing" rather than resting :-)

Damika

I can't wait to see how he'll implement his plan

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

s476

A question: why couldn't daniel analyse the breakers? How does them listening to the overseer stop/hinder daniel?

s476

Thanks for the chapter :)

Monsoon117

This is known in author-speak as word variety, and it's completely a viable complaint/issue.

Monsoon117

He hasn't been killed yet. Althea plans on doing it by infiltrating there ranks and operations. That's what she's been doing all this time.

Jacob Santos

There are some, "Know" should be "now" in one location. Their -> There or There -> Their mixup. I think I found one other but I forget.

Destruct180

Found somethimg off "Eh, I guess," Kessiah said. "I practiced with some birds before this, so that really helped. I had Caprika send me an anatomy chart of the gialgathens too, so that really helped. It could still use some work, but the wings should be functional when I finish them" the double helped ....

Harb

Thanks for the chapter. Could be my memory but I thought Thisbey had been killed after spreading the fake interview.

Jess Koch

Third

Monsoon117

Sorry for the late chapter guys. Let me know if something is off or if you have a good idea.

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