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217 A Shattered God

🕑 Added 2019-05-19 04:47:51 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

I fell into the voice of Lehesion and cracked them out over a few minutes. When I'm feeling the flow, good lines usually come pretty easily. It's the silence between the storms I struggle most with.

alexander julian

I think Helios has access to a fuck ton of mana using the cipher and the atom splicing thing Yawm does but he needs to use his own mana to create the splices and that mana can be drained. My question is how he invests his stats. If he isn't focused on mana (which i can only assume he's not because he ran out without even using it to actually cast spells while fighting for only a couple of hours. Then is it what... Luck? Perception?

I'm super pleased with the various 'boss' type characters in this chapter. they all have suitably impressive skills and responses. I'm a little confused by Helios mana reserves, but daaang. Sentinels, overseer, Daniel, Helios, and crazy Lehesion, all showing their ultimates.

He doesn't actually know that. He just knows it bottomless. He assumes it's the planet feeding the mana pool, leaving behind swathes of dead vegetation and microbes.

PloofDoodle

How long were you sitting on those lines @Monsoon117 ?

sorry if this is a little nitpicky. Awesome story :D

I think his bounty should be S- or A+. I understand Lehesion's a very large threat, even planetary scale, but he has very little ability to spread. Yawm had an S bounty because of his knowledge of the runes, and because of his scary persuasive charisma. If he wasn't contained, like a virus, he would infect others; and like a dangerous outbreak there's no certain way of knowing how dangerous it could be. With Lehesion, as powerful as he is, he is still only a single creature. Unless the hybrid research in his body is a huge threat, an S bounty seems high to me.

Shannon Smith

Why didn't he tell them that Lehesion's mana pool was killing the whole planet? That would have given them more important info, as well as stop at least some of them from whining about 'running away'.

Monsoon117

That is excellent. I want everyone to feel real and to experience emotion in the story. If I can turn what was once believed to be a robot into some worth remembering, then I count that as a victory.

Stepan Kadlec

I came and stayed for the fighting, but this was an interesting emotional sting that I did not expect in such a chapter.

Nakkus

Thanks for the chapter! I am looking forward to seeing what his new evolution brings. :)

Monsoon117

They don't know exactly. It could be coming directly from an Old One.

Alex R

Is Lehesion's mana pull from Geiss interplanetary? So could he pull the mana from like Earth or even inside Daniel? If not, then wouldn't the easiest way to beat him is to stick him inside Daniel and have him keep eating him or even just put him on Earth and do the same.

FrostyFeet

It’s above 8047 at the given moment IIRC

Monsoon117

He did.

Asurathe13th

The level of badass, that is this chapter, is over 9000!!!

Alex R

Didnt he also just complete the Sentinel quest since he retrieved a dead Sentinel's armor/spear?

Bobby B.

Wow... actually immortal... wow

Monsoon117

I've never read the marvel comics, but I have seen a few of the movies.

Mason Sudul

Damn you and your cliffs!!! Why do you have to be so good at hype and storytelling yet be so consistent with your cliffage!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaug!

Calleman20

Awesome chapter more please more yay.

Alex k

Soooooo not the cliff

Tyicius

Also "She walked the portal." should be "She walked through the portal." ?

Since he is now entering Multiverse territory I'm wondering of how much Marvel comics you've read? Because If you draw some inspiration from the Marvel universe, I think I can see how he could eventually approach the power of an Old One.

Alex R

IIRC, it's been almost 16 months and 123 chapters

Ashrothe

Wooo, been waiting a long time to see what this evolution would bring!

Gavriel

Yah

Tyicius

For you, Effort = A Great Chapter. This is why I will continue supporting your content.

Cliff hangers... every time....

Scott Frederiksen

*heavy breathing* nnnn-n-n-next chapter please 😅

Kevin Ramos

Noice Devistateing, and another god damn Yam, but still nice.

Monsoon117

Alright, I can adjust that. I just didn't want them to seem too chummy since they first met.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter!

Leonard Marchant

""I don't know if any of you are close combat specialists. If so, stay away from me as I'm fighting, or else your skin will peel off." One of the breakers hissed through his intercom, "Is that a threat?" I rolled my eyes, "It's information. Let's go." This interaction comes across as quite manufactured. I don't think it realistic for someone to perceive what Daniel said as a threat in that context. I know some people are unreasonable, but it's still a little odd and stood out to me.

Tomislav Fistrić

Fuuuuuuuuuu..... next chapter!!!!!! Pleaseeeeeee :((((

s476

Awesome!

Nyye

When being one universe isn't enough for you "eh I could be more"

Aaawww shieet! Here we go!

Some BS Deity

Next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Pls and thank you.

Pixelblade

Chooo chooo! All aboard the hype train!

Voidwalker1992

Oh yes can't wait for the next chapter

Brilliant :)

Raiser

The walking Cinematic Multiverse.

Sebas Tian

fucking cliff...... why cliff? love the chapter!

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

M van Dongen

Cliff ! Galactic sized cliff ahead !

Jake V

Loved it!

bracabrad

Multiverse confirmed.

Thanks for the chapter. What happened to kessiah?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Woooo, let's get serious now.

Jonathan Walker

Holy shit multi verse hahahaha this is AWESOME!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what that will mean for him FUCK YES!!!!!!!!

Ausner Gentil

Thank you great chapter

Wow....

Omega

Thanks for the chapter, thats dome real hype

Monsoon117

This is a very, very long chapter that I put a lot effort into. That being said, effort doesn't always equal an excellent read. Let me know if there's flaws, continuity errors, etc. That's what ended up happening in the Chrona and Krog fights, and I had to go back and change those action sequences quite a bit to make them more consistent with the progression in the story. Either way, let me know if there's stuff like that going on here, and as always, I hope you guys enjoy.


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