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219 A Wider World

🕑 Added 2019-05-27 21:10:44 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

One day the sharing status thing is gonna bite him in the butt. That or were gonna find out why everyone else thinks it's a bad idea

alexander julian

Daniel, immortal dictator?

Shannon Smith

If it weren't connected to creating the hybrid 2.0, I might agree. Unless Schema is actually causing more eldritch disasters so he can cause fear and gain more backing for his 'protection'. Which actually makes a lot of sense, now that I've said it.

Shannon Smith

If you can't kill something, remove it from the battlefield. Doesn't matter how tough you are thrown into a gravity well without the strength to pull yourself out of it. Or a star...

ShaRose

I guess I'll say it... It's midriff, not mid-drift.

TheHoblit

you would think Schema would pay extra attention to his status considering how much schema has interacted with him, I feel like this "hack" would have had to have been supported by Schema itself.

Nakkus

Thanks for the chapter!

Agreed!

FlawlessMovement

Keep up the awesome work

Monsoon117

It shows him looking like his norma, human self during those times. Of course he's grayish, has quite a few scars, and is very big.

Let's just say that Daniel has become a giant phallic humanoid. He peels back when necessary lol

James Witt-Larsen

I feel like I'm visualizing him wrong since I thought his Living dimension acted more like a epidermis like layer that when ripped off was like getting skinned, but when kissing and more personal activities *wink wink* freely to an extent recieds back like the suit from "SPAWN".

James Witt-Larsen

Plus what about his...Althea special time *wink wink*. Doesn't his metal skin peal back when doing various activities like kissing and such revealing his human features versus the smiling maw and such or am I visualizi g

Monsoon117

He's been able to for a while, mostly just his shape. He couldn't peel his armor off his body for instance and then look normal though. It would be very uncomfortable at this point, like peeling off your own skin.

Can he alter his appearance now? It would make it easier for him to blend in when he's not on duty.

Wrath

Can't wait to see what the legend of the harbinger turns into for the people of the Galaxy since he is a living breathing Multiverse into the who has skin more dense and harder than a neutron star's core they're going to be a lot of people that are going to worship just a piece of his armor as if it were pure gold. I also would love to see how people think and react to him just to see what his Legend is like since he is a very powerful and I would love to see how he fixes what's left of Earth into a major power.

Some BS Deity

Nice chapter

28th00

I actually quite like Helios here. Cool dood.

FrostyFeet

How basic.

Bobby B.

Ah, going with the eternal eldritch living battery idea?

Alex R

From what we have seen so far, Daniel is the only Earthling that can take over Earth due his ability to own a planet. Since he only got it by having a high tier guild.

Prinny Knight

Pull Big L off his planet through some kind of trap tele, then hes a powerless immortal, still un killable, just with a great lack of aoe instakill spells -dood-

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Jacob Santos

It is a little funny. I would suggest keeping it but I am guessing it would take a reader out of the story

Kemizle

When he builds up earth I hope he stays in power as the leader of it and make is the home world of his legion

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter. When/if you release the book will there only be the e-book variant or are there possibilities for hardcovers?

Jonathan Walker

Fucking amazing thank you so much, this book has never once disappointed me and I doubt it ever will. Thank you.

Kemizle

I hope his convos aren’t being recorded

Voidwalker1992

Living this !!! Great read

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Corwin Amber

'I face a palm to her' this sentence needs rewording

Monsoon117

He hasn't given it away just yet. These are just suggestions for the most part. Past weapons and armor do not upgrade with him. Once disconnected, the armor weakens and can no longer upgrade with him. I hope this makes sense.

Lars R.

Its bugging me a while already, do past weapons and armor he made from his 'skin' evolve with him or not? Also why would he give everyone his armor thats really stupid, imagine that livin metal breaker getting that stuff. Also the research, so many reasons not to do it.

Monsoon117

For Daniel, his people take priority.

The chapter gave an interesting global view. Always looking forward to reading more of your work so I'll wait patiently for more :-D

crusty pickle

I was expecting daniel to walk into the eldritch ward and proceed to absorb the eldritch amd give the people potions or something

Tommy Littlefield

I’m guessing he’s gonna contain this dude in one of his universes and siphon his mana but because it’s a different kind of mana he is also going to acquire his second from/mode thing which he can turn into while using that mana instead of his own also this dude is perfect for the job since he has infinite mana (much like Daniel does)

s476

this!

Dominic French

Yeah I loved this chapter. The character interactions were really well done. Im kinda hoping the story takes a little break from the pure combat and does some more world and character building like this chapter did. I'm also looking forward to seeing how Earth is doing. Did any Nations survive?Are there any power blocs forming other than his. What are the people of the empire like? Is the planet he is on covered by a city. Are there megastructures like Dyson spheres and such? I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take the story and world.

Monsoon117

Thank you. I put a lot of effort into coming up with his back story and personality traits. He was a character that I wanted readers to be like, "Man fuck that guy," but over time they learn to appreciate him. I'm glad to hear it's working out.

Kyle

I'm a simple man. I see New World, I read.

s476

thanks for the chapter! Two damn months to go ( in story time though, so it's not that bad), but i also expected him to be meeting the emperor first thing. My expectations :(

Monsoon117

Hanged out with a lot of family this week, which slowed down the posting of this chapter by about 2-3 days. Still , it's important to stay social and connected with people. This is especially true for an author since my profession is so cerebral. It's easy to get caught in my head, so deloading with some fresh perspectives is very nice. Either way, I hope you guys enjoy the chapter as always.

Omega

Second then

Jess Koch

First


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