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221 The Learning Process

🕑 Added 2019-06-07 23:06:06 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

He did that for Torix's armour before my man. Just out of his skin coz it's way tougher. Just had crystals set on it fir extra mana

alexander julian

Yes plz. Hod is my main man. Hod the over seer when he gets there sounds like the most amazing thing ever

alexander julian

Nah man. Monsoon is like the weather 😂😂😂

alexander julian

Yeah it would have been a shame if he'd just shown up and he'd missed the opportunity

alexander julian

Torix's character sheet was so sad in comparison to Daniels. Keen to see his skill list though. That thing must be crazy. Also why was Torix so careful about staying alive and stuff before when progressing if he can just regenerate as little more than an inconvenience. Did he think it would hurt or something!?

alexander julian

Certainly the whole three mana type things moves him from ravenously progressing warrior/predator to the more wise warrior-mage-guild master thing he's got going on now. More balanced and builds as well as consumes. Daddy Daniel is shaping up

Althea Tolstoy, the Shapeless Arbiter(Althea Tolstoy, the Shapeless Arbiter(lvl 10,016 | Class: Breaker | Location: Belka-623) It's repeated twice.

Ordeal

In earlier times there was mention of crystals formed from mana when it radiates a lot of it. So.... Why not give armor made from those crystals (but refine them to be permanent) to torix.

Nakkus

Great chapter, thanks! Yay, Torix is back! Now we need Hod too. :D Dry Man needs his wing man! :D

SquidTheJim

I'm grateful that you don't do other character's perspectives very often (actually I can't remember the last time you did, if ever?) but this bit from the viewpoint of Torix was really cool to read. Daniel's jaw wasn't the only one to drop after his little mishap with red magic either. Top notch as always! :D

Jeff091

hi, thanks for the chapter typo Althea Tolstoy, the Shapeless Arbiter(Althea Tolstoy, the Shapeless Arbiter( 2*Althea Tolstoy, the Shapeless Arbiter(

William

oh, cheers. just looking back at the last couple of posts, it seemed pretty fixed.

Alex R

Not really, Monsoon doesnt have a set release schedule. He could have gone on vacation or something. It was just Father's Day in the US.

William

by now there would've already been 2 chapters out. Yet there are none. What is going on?

Grevis165

Training montage arc go! Lol. Great chapter, well done on Torix's revival. I liked the first person point of view there.

Azuolas Korsakas

Awesome chap. Just wish they came faster

Gavriel

Cliffhanger! It is a nice chapter, but the scope that was implied makes this chapter way too short (in a way you did too good a job, this chapter is too coherent for it's length)

bracabrad

Time to make Torix a living body from Dan's flesh material.

Monsoon117

Origin mana wouldn't be the best way too, but Daniel's got options in that regard.

Alex R

We've had Caprika, Thrisbey, and the Levelers IIRC.

Some BS Deity

Need Moar, also am i forgetting something or was that the first time we had a torix pov?

Excellent chapter

Wrath

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

Alex R

Now that you say that it makes perfect sense that that is what Monsoon is setting up.

James Danger Latham

Fukn AWSOME dude!

Aidan MacFetridge

I'm just reading this and thinking how cool it would be if Daniel and Torix worked together and made Torix a golem body with his armor

Jacob Santos

Certainly. I just hope the next chapter is only a few days out instead of a week.

Monsoon117

Good old then and than. Dangit and thanks.

Monsoon117

Others mentioned this. I changed it completely.

Monsoon117

Yes and fixed. Thanks.

Monsoon117

I can rephrase it a bit. Thanks for the catch.

Leonard Marchant

"its presence creates panic in chaos in the souls of the strongest eldritch," I think this needs revision?

Leonard Marchant

each carrying stronger qualities than* the mana types used to create them. They are referred to as higher manas." :). I might have stripped my lair down till nothing but scorched stone lay* beneath its remains.

love the chapter :D

Asurathe13th

With Daniel's new ability, cant he create Torix a new and far more powerful body?

HOLY CRAP THAT CLIFF!! Loved the chapter it was freaking amazing, can't wait till you drop the next one!

Excellent! A review of how the system works, personal growth for Daniel and character development for Torix all in one. Awesome stuff man!

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Hana Buechel

Great chapter!!!

Corwin Amber

'panic in chaos' -> 'panic and chaos' (i think, maybe you meant to phrase it differently)

TheFoud3er12

cliff

Brent Thomas

Nice training chapter. I can see Daniel merging all sources of mana. A living multiverse with access to all sources of mana including the highest source! Has possibilities.

Anon_Anon

Also, small capitalization error: The situation on giess devolved in much the same manner, in fact. > The situation on Giess devolved in much the same manner, in fact.

Anon_Anon

Torix keeps mentioning how he is heading towards Giess even though he knows (from the messages) that Daniel and co are on Belka 623. Is this intentional?

Tommy Littlefield

Thanks for the chap

Tommy Littlefield

Nah it’s saying that his very existence and being a living being made of whatever he is scares them because he is essentially a predator designed to hunt them specifically ergo and existence above them as in a superior evolved being (kind of like if humans went from being the top of the food chain and suddenly aliens that were naturally evolved to be immune to our weapons and dead set on genocide of the human race showed up)

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Dominic French

Thanks for the story!

Dominic French

This Beings Existence above them sound a little wonky

Dominic French

Living Multiverse, the Harbinger of Cataclysm(lvl 9,018 | Guild Leader: The Harbinger's Legion | Class: None | Location: Belka-623) - A being composed of an unknown matter with untold potential, its presence creates panic in chaos in the souls of the strongest eldritch, this being's existence above them. With the ability to shift forms at will, this amorphous creature holds no permanent shape and is evergrowing.

Dominic French

Awesome Chapter, I think I found an nonsensical statement here

Monsoon117

Yes, this is true.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Monsoon117

I can try to.

Found a mistake ( It helped to have someone creating clear boundaries for me even if they annoyed me.f) other wise great story cant wait.

Tartle

The damn cliffhangers you leave! Curse them all! Keep up the fantastic work Monsoon!

Mason Sudul

God this chapter was good which makes your insufferable cliffs even worse! Awesome job.

Nyye

Love it, just wondering if we can get some art for his evolution or something?

Kevin Ramos

Noice, but what I want to see is what the other types of mana do if they are applied to even horizon, which I assume uses ascendant originaly?

Omega

Thanks for the chap Mistake: It helped to have someone creating clear boundaries for me even if they annoyed me.f theres a random "f"

It was worth it. Though your cliff-hangers are infuriating (in a good way)

s476

Excellent chapter, I especially enjoyed torix view, the more technical details of your world building, and am looking forward to the meeting. Thanks for the chapter!

Voidwalker1992

Very nice. Contained thought out world building and a nice bit of exploration into what Daniel can do and will do

Monsoon117

Yes. This is exactly correct. I hope that makes sense.

Alex R

This cube is placed with thousands of other cubes within a chamber that slows your perception of time, elongating the effects of the mythical compendium. Shouldn't this be speeds up your perception of time. Since Daniel's is perceiving time faster than it is (time passes slower outside the area)

Mimic

damn dude this is one of the better chapters you've posted

EitherWay

Noice


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