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223 His Own Way

🕑 Added 2019-06-25 18:57:54 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

I didn't want this training arc to last hundreds of pages. That's a full novel in other works, and despite the serial format, I still want the pacing of my novel to be somewhat fast. I can understand the sentiment though.

alexander julian

Yeah I'd just say the training montage stuff felt a bit... Rushed? Like was he just attacking with elements and stuff? It's kind of sudden given he hasn't really been that flashy before. And what we're his summons? We're they dimensional golems or natrual summons? And he just suddenly learnt to control them because he was using his mana for directly? I guess I'd just like a little more detail

I think Daniel's gonna be turning Legion of One, Star Forger, and Endless Flood into a legendary skill of their own. Does that mean his third legendary is gonna use Primordial Mana in some way? Is his Soverign Skill going to utilize a flow between the three higher manas? Find out next post, on my crappy Not!GaimTheorie!! But in all seriousness, good chapter, Thank you.

PloofDoodle

Will he forge a new skeleton/covering for Torix?

Bud Terry

I’m just curious if legendary skills can affect one another. As most of the new mythical skills he has has been changed by the one he has I gotta wonder if those changes would stay in a new legendary skill too

Jachin Nelson

Wouldn’t it just be Mana, if he combined them all together

Dao

Can't wait till he masters the other form of mana and combines them all into one

Conor McGroarty

I thought I was Conor M...

Connor M.

Harbringer doesnt realy fit him any more, hes practicly a one man armagedon machine. On a side note im pretty interested to see how these new abilities effect his starforger skill.

Raiser

Daniel going to solo clear a few planet worth of Eldritch now.

Zachary Smith

Liiiiit

Thanks for the chapter. Im loving the names of these skills. Keep up the good work

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Vin Reisling

Living the conversion to general we are undergoing. Been a while since Daniel lead an army.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to see the results.

Voidwalker1992

I enjoyed the chapter!!

Tommy Littlefield

Yep I also think this will result in his sovereign skill fusing together all three base mana types into a new type of super mana stronger then any other

BrauBaer

Fuck yeah! WE ARE LEGION! WE ARE ONE! Best phrase ever. Thanks for the chapter!

Mason Sudul

The whole bit about the statue man was fantastic. Loved the whike chapter alot and I cant wait to see that kind of thing in the real world.

Monsoon117

Thanks.

Omega

Loved the chapter, it has that epic feeling that feels natural, which is amazing. Small mistake: At the height of the war, a grin surface on my armor. The jagged teeth exposed a haunting white light behind them. Should be surfaced I believe

Sean Ulrich

So Daniel currently has 4 mythical skills. Star forger (Temperature control and crafting), Hunter of many (mana siphon, heightened senses), Legion of One (Leadership skills, presence) and now an Endless Flood (element creation, elementals). By the look of things he will also try to learn some mind magic skills too. I can see legion of one + star forger + endless flood. Creating and enchanting a giant elemental army, then leading them into a giant battle. Then maybe mind magic + hunter of many + ??? Then Shazam ya got a sovereign skill.

Gaah! Just gets better and better. I'm glad he got to test himself a bit :-D

s476

Really enjoyed the chapter! Need the next one soonish, what class is that skill... ? Thanks for the chapter!

Asurathe13th

MAKE HIM A NEW BODY!!!

Gavriel

Maybe even a sovereign skill? Remember, he was there for months in a limitless playground...

Rhaias

Thanks for the chapter! Glad to see Torix back

M van Dongen

Legendary fusion skill ?

Sebas Tian

Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

Let me know if you enjoy the chapter. The only shaky part is the beginning. I edited it several times to make it clearer, but it could still be confusing. After that, I felt very at home with the way it flowed, giving me some confidence. Either way, let me know if you enjoyed it.


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