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225 Moving With Intent

🕑 Added 2019-07-05 20:58:51 +0000 UTC

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Inslayer

*they're* obelisks covering them in balls of impenetrable white light. Should be their*

Jeff091

hi, thanks for the chapter typo Shapeless Arbiter Arbiter 2*Arbiter

Monsoon117

He could, but it would still take a lot of time. The idea has potential over the long term though.

Alex R

Can Daniel learn healing magic now that he can change his mana from ascendant to primordial/quintessence?

Monsoon117

Ah, my mistake. Thanks for the reminder.

Alex R

Up till atleast Chapter 184, Althea was called the Shapeless Arbiter. Not the Formless Arbiter.

Monsoon117

two months. After a few sucesses from Daniel's party, they had another month added.

How much time frame was originally given if there are 3 weeks left?

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

s476

I think you reached your goals 10/10

Monsoon117

definitely ruined. Thanks.

Zed

Runed city or ruined city?

Monsoon117

I'll use a different wording for the first few mentions so that the confusion isn't there.

Voidwalker1992

Very nice chapter has a feel of momentum and things to come

Joseph

It took me a while to realize that when you wrote 'hung gialgathen' you were talking about a noose, and not that the gialgathen was slinging some serious dick.

Jonathan Walker

Holy shit things are about to get real they just pissed him off to such a degree they will wish they hadn't

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Sean Ulrich

asKorg -> as Korg

loimprevisto

Man, sir felt weird to *here* for me here --> hear

Monsoon117

Added it, "I'm not the norm, but I'm not too uncommon. Anything else sir?" <-- something to that effect. Daniel replied, "Uh...no."

EitherWay

Also, what did the tentacle man say? Looks like you forgot a sentence I thinks

Monsoon117

I wrote this chapter 3 times, each of them wildly different from the last rendition. I eventually reset it for the most part, only keeping the edition I wrote after planning out some more of where they story's heading. The reason I kept this version over the others was a matter of focus; this one carried a momentum the others lacked. I never want to give you guys filler, and this chapter seemed to avoid that while keeping the story heading in an excited direction with many highs and lows. Either way, I hope you all enjoy.

Karolus

YAY!

EitherWay

Noice


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