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227 Retaliation

🕑 Added 2019-07-13 20:58:14 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Yay!! A new Torix Body! I hope we get to see some Schema descriptions of what his new body will do for him. :)

Monsoon117

They needed the water from it to survive.

Alex R

Also I'm surprised the rift wasnt closed already with the Eldrich only being 1k or so levels.

Alex R

I'm wondering if Torix will get the higher DR that Daniel has.

Alex R

Glossing is superheating the planet's surface and then allowing it to rapidly cool. You would need to have a floating city to be able to survive that.

Thanks for the chapter. Why is the scheduled glassing not considered on the safety factors? Edit: i reread and realised it said safety rankings. My mistake

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Zachary Smith

Awesome

bracabrad

I can't wait for the stats on "Torix: The Malevolent tactician of Chaos."

Monsoon117

Thank you man. Fixed.

Monsoon117

You guys really liked it, and I figured elaborating on it would answer people's questions that don't read the patreon comments. It fit in perfectly too, so it was a win-win situation for me.

Monsoon117

Good question. Find out next time on the next episo-I mean chapter of the New World.

Monsoon117

I do love that light novel. I read it forever ago, and it's actually how I found RRL. I didn't realize he was blackened bones however? Just checked the images, yeah, I'm thinking something different altogether but the shoulder plate and cape comparison makes sense. I was using Sauron from LoTR for the art design of the body.

Leonard Marchant

Kneeled and knee are too repetitive I would guess. Plus kneeled kind of implies both knees while lunged implies just one, fitting with "a knee" better.

Gamertecno

One thing I have been curious about for awhile, why do you use lunged onto a knee rather than kneeled onto a knee?

Gamertecno

Ah Torix shall become a supreme Overlord that rules from the shadows!

Qrystof

Way to slip in the exposition on the fire breathing. Can't wait for Torix to body swap!

Bud Terry

Seeing as the new body is made from a multiverse. Could it be considered a single universe in it?? Allowing torix to use storage the same way??

Sean Ulrich

Great chap! Torix's new body makes me think of Ainz Ool Gown for some reason...

Idan tal

Thanks for the chapter

Omega

Thanks mistake: I'm glad you're our side.

M van Dongen

Excellent flow here.....STATS?

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

crusty pickle

Curios on the stats of the new body

s476

Worked out well, this chapter is excellent too, Iove the image of torix future body! Thanks for the chapter!

Kevin Ramos

I'll say it Bone dady

crusty pickle

Np, have a good day monsoon

Monsoon117

Thank you. I worked hard on both the changes and this chapter. This feels good to read.

crusty pickle

I liked the change to the last chapter alot, and this was also a great chapter as well good writing

Monsoon117

I got a good grip of where the story's going, and my planning improved quite a bit. A good plan means that the work involved is more fluid and efficient. Hopefully this reflected itself in the content of this chapter. Just as well, I went and rewrote the beginning of the last chapter. A few patrons noted that the gialgathens were a bit too desperate. I agreed with the sentiment, so I changed that interaction some. It should make Daniel's intentions clearer, more concise, and better in general. Let me know if that worked out or not.


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