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228 An Enemy Worth Fearing

🕑 Added 2019-07-15 20:54:50 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

Its a giant big dick space ship cannon that hit him square in the head. It does some damage bruh

alexander julian

It would be expensive too😂😂

Shannon Smith

And he just keeps getting stronger. Imagine what he could do if he wasn't trying to keep the prisoners alive... He's a one man extinction event at this point. I'm wondering about the cannon somehow shaving off a third of his health, though. Are these planet destroying level weapons, or something? Because his mass and health pool aren't exactly low. Feels a little like the 'because the author said so' rant I had in chapters previously about defenses and offenses not matching up in the least.

So awsome !! Can't wait to see how much Dan is going to kick their asses ^^

Connor Alexander

We need more cataclysmic fights! I'm loving the amount of sheer badassery going on in these scenes, and the amount of destruction these entities wield upon much more imaginable scenes is awesome! Thanks for the chapter! On a side note, is/will Daniel be able to bend light with his gravitational abilities at some point?

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter!

s476

That finish was epic, thanks for the chapter!

Bobby B.

Holy shit man!! There's the cataclysm we know and love!!

Tommy Littlefield

Yeah he’s been nailing the end of the chapter one liners pretty much since they left earth haha

Tommy Littlefield

Agreed that and the badass lines he always be having at the end of a chapter or after he just kicked some ass haha

Tommy Littlefield

That line was more then just a bit cheesy haha 😂

Leonard Marchant

"A brother to my left. A sister to my right. Together we stand. Together we fight." I need some lactaid for all that cheese lol

Corwin Amber

awesome chapter :) thanks

bracabrad

We're sorry. you seem to have activated "Wrath of the Multiverse." mode. There is no Exiting this mode while "WotM" has a target or goal. Take 90% losses to all living and non-living tokens within range of the "WotM". retreat is recommended.

Zachary Smith

Holy shit! That last line was fucking gold!

Monsoon117

I didn't want it to feel too system-ey here. Makes it come across as a game rather than a real fight.

Thanks for the chapter. What would be the difference if Daniel made his speeches while using augmentation aura to motivate them? Also what about the “check your stats before battle”?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Alex R

They probably get massive XP nerfs due to their age similar to Torix and being a Necromancer. Also you need to deal damage to the enemy to get a portion of the XP see Daniel and co vs Lord of Worms

Jonathan Walker

Holy shit. The next chapter is going to be so damn epic, he hasn't gone a rampage in such a long time I can't wait to read it

Bud Terry

Know it doesn’t have anything to do with this chapter but these questions have been bugging me for awhile

Bud Terry

I’m just wondering what’s the stat bonus for creatures in his guild up to now?? And is there an age limit on schemas system before leveling up?? I’m just picturing over protective parents power leveling their 2 year old to 1000 plus levels

I love how hype you make fighting scenes. Someone above mentioned too much buildup for not enough fighting and I have to disagree. I think the buildup and hype made the final statements that much more impactful and made the ending of the chapter that much better. Thanks for the chapter. good stuff

Tyicius

And now the crescendo! This novel would be incredible animated.

TheFoud3er12

best chapter ever!!!!!!!👍

Monsoon117

Oh god. My bad. Thanks for the help.

Aidan MacFetridge

your->you're

Omega

Thanks for the chapter, *sigh* mistske: "So you all want to pretend your monsters?"

Philipp

This is going to be awesome :P I can see him causing devastation on the level of lehesion right now with his new powerups and I hope to god I'm right and he will usher forth a wave of death and destruction like only a true calamity could.

Qudy

I can't wait to read about the fight. And to see Torix`s new body. The way u write down every fight, crafting and other actions they are quite awesome. I could say that they have their own charm. Thx for the chapter and good work man!

Monsoon117

I didn't want to drag the chapter on too long. It felt great having it end there for me. It doesn't overwhelm the viewer with action, but it leaves them wanting more. More you shall have. That's for sure.

Alex R

"So you all want to pretend your monsters?" should be "you're/you are monsters?"

This is gonna be so much fun :-D

Kristoffer

Thanks for the chapter, I liked it but it felt like the buildup was too big for the chapter to end without more fighting. I really like how you portray Daniel, his might is awe-inspiring and fits well with his progression so far.

Kristoffer

#thirdgang

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. Wait, what do I think? Well that's polite of you to think/ask. I think writing action chapters is always riveting, and I love immersing myself into them. The next chapter will be fun as well, I can promise you guys that.

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#firstgang


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