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229 The Battle for Polydra

🕑 Added 2019-07-24 21:52:13 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

Ice covered it, containing it for a few seconds.

Uh; did Daniel throw a ball of iced plasma? I don't think that's physically possible; Plasma is superheated ionized particles. Freezing it would just turn it into a gas or solid that isn't plasma anymore.

alexander julian

Honestly his title should change😂😂. He Harbringer himself now in yawms arc. Actually im that respect if this ebds up being a multi biok series calling yawms arc harbringer of cataclysm abd this one something like force of nature or leader of monsters or something like rgat could be cool

Shannon Smith

That felt like a much longer chapter than usual. Though Daniel feels more like a force of nature than a harbringer at this point.

Monsoon117

I actually called it a destroyer there for word choice. Was it difficult to understand when reading it?

Alexander Dupree

destroyer. At this range, the cannons couldn't touch me. They were far from helpless, however. From the hull of the dreadnought, Should be dreadnought. At this range, the cannons couldn't touch me. They were far from helpless, however. From the hull of the dreadnought,

Connor Alexander

a late comment, but yet again, another stunning chapter! Love your work and keep it going~

bracabrad

Eruptions of Mana

Monsoon117

I never intend to. After all, retirement is for the job you hate, not the passion you live for.

Jonathan Walker

Healer and Warden

Monsoon117

What are the other two stories? Randidly and MoL? Perhaps Delve and Azarinth Healer?

Monsoon117

I'm going to do my best to make the wait shorter this time, but I don't want to compromise quality. In this case, I'm working with situations for the first time. A bit slower release lets me temper and refine what I make.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the awesome chapter!

Tai Irwin

That ending just makes me excited! Like 'I'm just gonna do something impossible, no worries' as he does throughout the book up to this part

Voidwalker1992

I loved this chapter. And now I have to survive the wait

Adrian

Amazing fight scene!

James Danger Latham

You are one of the better writers out there, never stop.

Gabriel

Horrifying but good chapter. I more and different types of hell not eldritch flavored. :P

Corwin Amber

'In my wake, I piles of corpses' sentence needs to be fixed

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Zachary Smith

Liiiit

Tom sawicki

Bang up job per usual! This story is awesome man! With cleaning up you could totally make his into a multi book series man! It’s really that good. Keep up the great work!

Jonathan Walker

It really would I'm following 3 books in total on this app and each of you have your own stories that are absolutely amazing and so gut wrenching and I can't help but bite my nails and expect the next chapter from each of you it is hard to think of anything else.

Asurathe13th

Seriously, when are you going to publish your works? This series would rival and surpass some of the best in the genre!

I'm imagining Daniel like freaking one puch man power at this point and I love it. I can't wait till we really get to see where he stacks up in the universe. I mean we know he is already a powerhouse on Yawmn's level but I can't wait till we really get to put that in perspective. Because when you hang with people of his power you forget that is not the norm in any way shape or form. I love this universe that you have crafted and always love when a new chapter comes out! Keep up the great work!!!!

Qudy

The whole fight/escape/heal scence are awesome and the details too. It's quite easy to see everything as i try to envision. Ur story and writting is like a first class reservation in the best hotel all over the world (in short it's the best). Thx for the chapter!!!!

s476

This chapter was perfect, really capturing what I love about the series. Of course not everything, but the fighting and eldrich stuff was done perfectly :)

Monsoon117

Thank you. I really appreciate that. I worked hard on the 'flow' this chapter. It felt rough on my first draft since the scenes weren't something I was used too.

Monsoon117

I shouldn't have used that gesture. It's what I thought up in the moment, but he doesn't have any water in his body for the most part. I'll reflect his nervousness/strain in other ways.

Monsoon117

Yes. Fixed.

Yes, surpas a volcano :-D

Kyle

I really lost myself in the reading of this chapter. 7000 words flew by and I loved every second of it. Great work Monsoon.

...psionics as well. Even Horizon fizzled... Event Horizon?

Omega

Thanks for the chapter, 2 mistakes and a question: Even Horizon fizzled the mental assaults before they reached me. I see you've allied yourself with a rather arrogant. Question, when you say he sweats, how does this work? Is his armor not bonded to his skin most of the time, and if so, does his armor produce sweat, and why? Also, this should totally be an animation, it would be truely epic in that over the top style that you can only really get when its animated

Sebas Tian

Great chapter man! Have been playing a lot of battlefleet gothic Armada 2 recently and I kinda envisioned those ships xD.

Monsoon117

You are. Excellent work.

Monsoon117

Right at 7,000 words, this was a very long chapter. It was difficult to write for several reasons, the least of which was enjoyment or motivation. It was actually because the scale of combat and the depth of the enemies required a lot of thought. I ended up sketching a few terrible drawings of the ships to give me a better sense of how they worked. The visualization helped when describing the scenes. Doing a bit of research for standard Sci-fi spaceships also helped a bit with assessing their capabilities. Regardless, hope you guys enjoyed.

Sebas Tian

AM I FINALLY FIRST!?!


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