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🕑 Added 2019-08-09 19:58:20 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Smith

"Yenno, in a safe ass hospital." Didn't one of the recent hospitals get blown up?

alexander julian

Daniel doesn't really let bad shit live as a rule. He could be way more powerful with the cipher but thinks its too dangerous to experiment to much. He doesn't take risks like that. Just risks with his life! 😊😊

So, armies of elemental crabs on giant dicks of death huh? I'll see myself out.

Monsoon117

Killing everyone still on the planet would be an act of mass murder. Schema's operating under limits here, and culling an entire population without warning is one of them. I agree though, glassing the planet is utterly necessary at this point. The Hybrids are just too threatening, as is Lehesion.

Monsoon117

Damn, got me there.

Leonard Marchant

"this beast is far more stable and intelligent than* it would otherwise be."

Monsoon117

Ah thanks, changed that to, "This was going to be fun." Also, it's very invigorating to hear you're enjoying the story still. Feels good.

Grog_Guy

Last line, "This going to be fun." Should be "This is going to be fun." Also, as a new Patreon member, just want to thank you for the story and all your hard work! I've really enjoyed it so far!

Lars R.

At that moment it makes more sense to glass the planet. Dont see why noone did it yet. Even if they kill everything it only needs one vial. Research is probably on other planets too. But there is a chance it isnt. So my conclusion everything other than glassing the planet makes you kind of like yawn, you mean well but...

crusty pickle

Making it difficult to absorb and hurting him at the same time, while still cooking him from the inside

crusty pickle

Hes also tougher now, i would spawn an ungodly amount of elemental crabs, make myself extremely hot rip into him with flames and singularities amd when he finally managed to blitz into him absorb him from the inside while keeping his temperature very high

Jordan U

Problem with that strategy is, what if it can absorb faster then Daniel can? He was having trouble with V 2.0. He would be stuck inside and be eaten from all sides

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Liked the chapter and POVs were good, they just feel a little weird because they're different. New miniboss doesn't sound unbeatable for Daniel at all. Even Lehesion fell to the comet attack. My strat would be hit with a black hole and event horizon to test its regen and your absorption. Then charge in and dig my way to the middle of his body so it can't hit me. Event horizon reduced and concentrated to a small dstance that is enough to hold off its absorption and armour spiked out to absorb its body. While you slowly absorb it from the inside, charge black holes to destroy it quicker.

Harb

Great Chapter, nice to see how powerful Daniel is from a different POV.

Jordan U

I keep thinking he should use one of the high-breeds as a battery for himself. You know, with there insane regen he could feast of of it for a long time if he paced himself. I also think he should blow a hole in Lehesion's chest and crawl into it and eat. It would be a way for a easy and fast power up. What i would do anyway.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Sean Ulrich

Soooo..... Daniel’s overpowered army of elementals that ravaged armies for weeks when he made the skill.... are now crabs. I can think of no finer army.

Loved this chapter. We don't get to see enough alternate character POV's. Also Im feeling the hype for this fight.

Monsoon117

Eh ok.

Voidwalker1992

Was a great chapter. Took me a second to switch POV. You may want to mention the name of the person who's perspective you switching to

Monsoon117

I enjoy that actually. It's a way of keeping the reader engaged and noting details. It also ensures I use details that make knowing the character obvious, EG, Kessiah being with Krog, healing with blood, etc.

Monsoon117

Yeah, her song Tick Tock is a classic. /s

Hana Buechel

LOVE the chapter though, liking what you’ve done with Keshia.

Hana Buechel

I feel at the top of the page the POV should be stated. E.g. Keshia’s POV ect.. Although one figures out who’s perspective is eventually, I was a bit confused at the begging in about who was speaking/thinking.

Hana Buechel

So that’s how one gets infected with 🦀 crabs. Lol

Some BS Deity

Lol, nice chapter

FrostyFeet

Crabrave 10/10, enjoyed the chapter. Thank you. I'd say that the POV was weird but well executed.

Jonathan Walker

Holy shit, ooooooooohhhhhhhhhh shit I can't fucking wait to read the fight that's about to break out I'm thrumming with energy right now I'm so looking forward to it ahhh hurry up and post the fight I'm going crazy here

BrauBaer

The Metall dick got crabs, nice. XD Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

Thanks, and fixed: Someone only devoured their eyes and the contents of their skulls.

s476

Enjoyed this one, especially with.kessiahs perspective. Looking forward to more :)

racktrack

"This was going to be fun"

Omega

Thanks mistake: Someone only at their eyes and the contents of their skulls.

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. Some topics to discuss and that I thought of while writing: 1st, was the Pov interesting? 2nd, Did Kessiah's development feel out of place or too quick? 3rd, did you enjoy some of the humor in this chapter? 4th, any memes about crabs.

racktrack

#firstgang

EitherWay

Noice


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