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232 The Minds of Many

🕑 Added 2019-08-14 02:09:15 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

His mind is being compromised by the mental assault. He needs to learn better mental defense skills

alexander julian

He hasn't learnt how to utilise his multistatus like that yet. Force of nature is hindered coz his mind is being hammered. Event horizon is still effected by resistance and obviously regen and hybrids (especially this one) is tenacious as fuck. Honestly after the first hybrid fight I'm surprised the lesser one's are so weak. Are they less powerful to be more controllable and easier to mass produce?

alexander julian

Whaddya mean his friends? I don't remember that

alexander julian

Hehe remember bal dag ruhl. 'I was tempted but doubted I would see through his deceptions. So I took the safer approach and beat his face in'

Shannon Smith

"I tiled my head" I think its 'tilTed'. Also, I agree with Ignat. He feels a little weak and a bit too straightforward in this fight. He's usually better at thinking outside the box when brute force doesn't work. And why did he 'resist' eating the damn thing?

Ignat Remizov

Daniel seems kinda weak here... Like I know he's fighting around a gravity well against a lvl ~20000 creature, but like, wouldn't Force Of Nature kick in and absolutely wreck this thing? The golden aura should be on the hybrid all the time, otherwise just given how insane Event Horizon + all the other abilities and skills are, Daniel should eat through everything thrown at him. Plus he's an actual *Multiverse*. Couldn't he just dive into parts of the creature and suck them into his dimensional storage? Like a black hole or dimensional slicing like Schema's spears? Surely he would have figured out what other abilities being a Multiverse grants him...

bracabrad

Talks of compromise? Time to pound 2.2 into the ground.

This is great stuff. Over the past couple of days I've binged the entire story and am keen for more, it just keeps getting better and better :P

Thanks for the chapter. Are we ever gonna visit Torix's 'friends' that were in the very early version of the story? You've been alluding to them a little recently and I kinda want to see what the interactions would look like now. I seem to recall a fun character or two and it would be a bit of a nostalgia hit for those of us who've been around for a while.

Leonard Marchant

Some kind of strong philosophy could maybe help defend against some mental attacks, like stoicism or something?

Hana Buechel

She’s too manipulative to compromise with. Plus their goals are too different. I’d say Daniel either says fuck off, or listens for information and to buy time...which is his goal. Great chapter!

s476

Thanks for the chapter! I was wondering when there would be contact with the enemy, really curious about her offer, as she must know, I assume, that shema would see any compromise as treason. At least I think so, because hybrids and mind benders are more important than one planet

Dominic Pernicone

Tohtella Adair was the scientist on the planet that initially lead Daniel into the wastes on an expedition to find gialgathen extremists. He then found out her and the Adairs were using Giess as an experimental ground for the Hybrids, with the gialgathen/espen tensions being the perfect breeding ground.

Omega

I like it

Kevin Ramos

Sure, I can survive lava, but can you?

Kevin Ramos

I know it's a little late to ask, but whose this bitch again?

Joshua Little

Volcano time. Thanks for the chapter.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

It’s likely that those with skills and training/speciality/ or even classes for psionics have some form of true damage just like physical damage. This is on top of we really have no idea how many psionics are workings together for this 2.0 entity. Additionally it may be part of Adair’s clan clan skill similar to the bloodmancy kessiah has, given by an old one, exceeding the general limits of the status. The race was exiled for a reason. Scheme probably wouldn’t have cared if they were genetically engineering soldiers to destroy eldritch.

Can i just say that i’m feeling chills and on the edge of my seat while reading this. Thank you for the chapter. One little nitpick is to change the hybrid with v2.2 because i confuse it with Daniel fighting other versions in the early parts of the chap.

Alex R

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Michael Nistler

While Daniel hasn't encountered too many psionics, it still seems he is almost too weak against them even though willpower and endurance are his two top stats. He does have those mental defense skills from his last skirmish with mind mages/psionics, but they way it is portrayed in the chapter seems to show that even with a literal mountain of willpower and the way he has trained which is basically dealing with the psychological terrors, and the horrors of the old one...one would think that a mind battle would be the arena his enemies would rather not fight on..

Chance

This was a very well written chapter. Don't second guess yourself so much that's why you have us to help point out mistakes for you to help improve your future writing. P.S Mark Twain could not spell and he is one of the greatest writers ever.

Monsoon117

I'm trying to doubt myself less and get more done writing wise. Let me know if there's a shift in quality, either positive or negative.


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